gave me shivers :).

this is honestly one of the sexiest Edwards I've read about. He seems far more danerous and sinister. but it's a good thing :)

wow that last chapter was good. UPDATE SOON!

I can't wait for the next chapter! I know edward will be mad but i wander what he'll say to her! :)

wow. i can already tell you that this review is not going to adequately give you feedback because i dont really know what to say. i think this chapter was pretty revealing, even though the whole situation hasnt been laid out completely. we still get to see though the relationship between edward and bella, and where its strained because of him doing alice and maybe bella being with other guys (and now planning to marry one), and other things.

"She would never be a Cullen. Once Esme died, the remaining Cullens wouldn’t want her anymore, and she would be alone. "

and that was just sad.

also, i like this part:

"The worst thing about having a best friend like Edward had been that he was simultaneously her worst enemy."

because no matter how hot someone is, that doesnt make them perfect, and it doesnt make them perfect for you. i like that you clear that away here, so we know that this will be more realistic and that things wont be all sunshine and rainbows, as it shouldnt be, because, well, when is life ever sunshine and rainbows? haha

anyways, i am really liking this story so far and i look forward to the next chapter. :)

please update very soon, your story is so enthralling! i'm feeling some Heathcliff in Edward, im not sure if that is your intention but i am loving the darkness. please keep it coming.

I REALLY LIKE HOW THIS STORY IS DEVOLOPING. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE.

haha I got so excited seeing it was updated.

I really love the descriptions. Edward's suits the picture your trying to portray, m Edward in a leather jacket. I really imagined Bella trying to be indifferent but unable to toward Edward. And how that scene sort of plays out like the whole 'i know your a vampie' scene in twilight.

You've also included little tid-bits about their past, which always keeps me guessing! I love the flash back/mystery sort of thing.

Keep going! Please update soon, you are doing so so SO well!

Your story is so unusual. Loving it...

Wow, I have to admit you have me so very curious. I can't wait for the longer chapters and more of an explanaton ;) Good job!

you're an unbelievably, amazing writer your story and plot line seems interesting, i hope you continue this story and update frequently.

This is a really great story so far.

The description of both action and emotion is fantastic.

I'm eagerly looking forward to the next installment!

great chapter even though I don't like third povs

wow this story is really intriguing already.

like..the only defect i can see is that it only has two chapters, and i want to read more!

I am loving this so far.

I like this story alot! I am kinda of confused about one little thing, is bella engaged to someone?