Reviews for Crossed Paths
Kawaii Hana chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Hey there! I think i'm first! Yeah! Hopefully... -.-

Oh well, what can I say about the prologue... Well, it still makes LOL as always esps... with Laguna's being... Laguna, ehehe...

I sure do hope you'd continue this one as soon as possible... For the next chapter I guess... you should focus more on Rinoa's uh... escape plan or... just about her this time... since you have given enough "spotlight" for Laguna and his, uh, unfortunate son... XD

But that's what I think... The way your story goes is all up to you though...

Keep writing...

Ja ne!

KAWAII HANA

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