|Reviews for Park Bench Memories|
| Bsquared19 chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
I totally agree! I think she just humors his stupid line!
| CorgiFromSpace chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
I'm trying this new thing where I review every story I like. That's why your is one of the one to get a review.
I LOVED IT. In a way, it was almost poetic. I enjoyed readng it a lot.
Thanks 4 sharing,
| crazycamera chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
i really liked this stroy.. i thought it was a good thought process. nice job
| smithens chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
It's too good for words.
It's THAT GOOD. I can't describe it, and I know a LOT of adjectives.
It's giving me a headache because I need a good adjective to describe it's beautifulness!
It's BETTER than the word fabulousticulous.
As in greater than. It's sweet, Aww-Worthy, Bestest...
Dude. I am officially at LOSS FOR WORDS. This has only happened TWICE before when reading fanfiction. It has outshined the shinyness of my vocabulary.
| iamwriter chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
the "line" does provide for a lot of discussion! Hopefully, the writers will disolve it for good
| jacklynvt11 chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
That was absolutely beautiful. Loved it. WOnderful work. :)
| burninganchors chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Lovely oneshot! Your imagery is fascinating, and you captured, IMO, what I think Booth honestly felt that day. We all knew that as soon as Brennan came into his life, everything else ceased to have meaning - even Cam, while she lay wheezing on that hospital bed.
Great job! Just a few things:
"She had always known instinctively knew where to find him."
That's either missing two commas, or a repetitive statement.
"The only line that existed was his own stubbornness his own blindness."
a comma is also necessary in between 'stubbornness' and 'his.'
Other than that, it was a wonderful read. Just remember that little things, no matter how small, can distract a reader from the true intent of the story.
Wonderful, again! :] Keep writing!
| csimesser1 chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
that was good
| Angeldream05 chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Beautiful! Really beautiful! I loved it!
Great job! :-)