honestly, the story was good until the rape of Hermione which felt more like a shock factor since everything involved in it went against how characters were portrayed in the books Hermione getting drunk at the ball, Viktor becoming a rapist, reading the rest of the story just leaves a foul taste in your mouth.

A good story, but I feel like some parts happened a bit too fast. The ousting of Fudge would probably have been entertaining.

I also agree with many others that making Krum a rapist was crossing the line, there's nothing in his canon character to even suggest that, quite the opposite. I also think Hermione deserves better than becoming a rape victim, how did she even get drunk?

Your best story so far. Your scene with Harry in the shop was great. It could have been a short story all on it's own. And each bit of family magic that Harry used, fit the situation and added to your story. Thanks!

Does it qualify as cognitive dissonance when a fic writer cares enough about the source material to dedicate hours of their time perfecting a well-written and interesting story based on it, but then also decides that it needs them to fix it and it's characters. Well, not even fix it; to passive aggressively deride events and characters. If you dislike major plot points and characters so much, why do you dedicate so much time writing fanfiction of the series?

You're a disgusting fucking freak. Stay gone, brain dead monkey.

Besides my last comment, I really like this story and concept. It was a great read!

Bash ron not krum and Harry is to good for the know it all bossy girl. At least it is not the gold digger slut or bloodline curse girl

Fascinating story.

I really enjoyed this story, except for the rape of Hermione. It seemed rather out of nowhere and didn't seem to add anything worthwhile to the story except maybe fill an apparent need you had to have at least one non-faceless good guy casualty in the story. Too bad it was the only true faithful friend Harry had at Hogwarts, but then I'm guessing that was the reason you chose her as the only named victim.

Loved this story!

Awesome!

Interesting read. Thank you for writing.

Damn!
That was a great One-Shot.
I just wish there were more chapters.
Family Magic, Secrets and Grimoires was always an interesting concept in Harry Potter Fanfics. I have never read a story with these things and it wasn't good.
Well done!

Nice

I feel the rape of Hermione was unneeded and also feels a bit off as im sure harry would have been keeping a close eye on his best and really only friend that night. otherwise good story