|Reviews for The Potter Family Grimoire|
| peterco chapter 1 . 4/21
this should be labelled as Horror...
| GreenEyesAreAwesome chapter 1 . 3/23
a really good story. though i suggest you to put a warning about rape, it disgust me even only reading about such a monstrous act.
| hunzbookwyrm chapter 1 . 3/13
Great story hope to see more from you soon.
| Dr Stranger chapter 1 . 3/2
Well crafted story. Thanks for sharing it with us.
| Lola Krantz chapter 1 . 2/25
very original story. I really enjoyed it. I liked the part where they played rock, paper, sissors for title.
| SpaideZ chapter 1 . 2/25
Just a Spade casually dropping by
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/29
This was the stupidest damn story I have ever read. Most of it made no fucking sense. There wasn't a beginning or an ending. Hell there was barely a middle
| FFFudgeUp chapter 1 . 12/12/2020
second time reading in just as funny as the first time. I love your stories. Thank you for sharing
| FFFudgeUp chapter 1 . 11/13/2020
Great little short story. Love that Harry found his purpose. Thanks for sharing.
| SomeoneWithTasteDoA chapter 1 . 11/7/2020
I hope you were date raped like this, since you seem to like to defend it. Fuck you to every Hell you know of, you disgusting bitch ass freak.
| Concolor44 chapter 1 . 10/30/2020
Okay, THIS gets slammed into Favorites HARD.
Smart!Powerful!Harry is just about the best Harry. You do it well.
On the strength of this and "HP& the Irish Choice", I'm adding you to Favorite Authors.
| Kali-blue chapter 1 . 10/24/2020
I enjoyed your story on its merits of cleverness, justice and revenge. However, I have found it somewhat tiresome that you often make the women victims like HG & Amelia Bones with dragon pox and had them disappear rather than contribute. Women never seem to be family or partners or if they were like in your Egyptian cursebreaker ultimately they fail as did Tracy to become fodder for HP’s Horocrux, because she really enjoyed be a rich widow, seriously. That seems more a curse that they could have removed. I did enjoy Hermione’s being someone in charge of her sexuality even if she didn’t drop Weasley like a ton of bricks.
I have no issue with the pink toad as a target for justice/revenge as she is unredeemable, but I hope this habit is not projection on your part. I might have had the underage girls and their issue take or tie up Krum’s estate as Half blood heirs rather than miscarry/abort to lose their ability to have magical kids. I’m not clear if Pomfrey explained the issue. In fact that whole idea is patriarchal drivel and seems that magic would not just favor raping men over innocents even if the law did favor pure bloods men over Muggle born girls. With all the law changes or removal of crap or crap people in power that Potter seemed to lean toward, it would see like that could be something he’d consider Unless you prefer him as savior to women. Idk
Anyhow, I like the dome magic and other Potter Magic’s and the forgettable man in the shop serving out his penance. Best Kali
| LAB1 chapter 1 . 10/11/2020
I really liked this story! Such a different world it could be with some old family magic available! Quite brilliant. Then Umbridge shows up and the story abruptly stops and jumps ahead 700 years into the future? Quite odd. I would have likes to see Umbridge get cursed with the same curse Dumbledore did!
| Wicked Kisses chapter 1 . 9/25/2020
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2020
This could well have been 20 such chapters long and I would have loved every word of it - it's just that good.