Reviews for Beyond the Red Door
GDeacur chapter 2 . 1/31/2010
This is phenomenal. If you continue this, you'll have a dedicated reader right here. Your story feels like a unique mixture of poetry and prose. It's an artistic "grittery" so fitting for space pirates. Yet I still feel for this poor guy and his band. Good story...
Cheshire Kat24 chapter 2 . 8/30/2009
Oh wow! How refreshing to read something that had some thought and care put into it. I especially like the terms you have used to put a more native and unified face on the pirate collective. Welx has a very definate feel, sound and meaning. I like the taste of it.

Your grammar is above average for this site, and the pacing is solid. My only complaints are chapter length and lack of descriptions. I like longer chapters. However the lack of detailed decriptions does lend the story a very isolated feel.

I look forward to more the story!

Cheshire Kat
MungoJerry chapter 2 . 6/3/2009
This is hard-core and QUITE fine..! I LURVE IT! Very enjoyable style! Do continue! X3