|Reviews for Everyone Else|
| JenJadeEyes chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
A perfectly emotional one shot, that could slot directly into canon if Bella had the ability/energy to sneak away without getting caught. I can only imagine how hard her hormones were fluctuating, throwing her right into a nesting instinct...I love this unique moment in time you've created!
| becca chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
This story was very sweet. i can see edward abd bella actually doing this, too. I felt like you really got thier characters. Keep writing!
| ThorinKiliandFili4ever chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
A great story. Very well written.
| arwens-light chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
SO I was thinking... When Bella says she wants to be just like everyone else... That could have been what made Edward approach Jacob about impregnanting Bella... Very well written :)
(I don't know if you know, but BeBe in America is a young woman's club wear store... it just made me giggle...)
You write very beautifully :)
| wuogkat chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
That was beautiful!
| ba2006 chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
awesome fic, cant wait for the next chapter
| karenlovestwilight chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Aww, this is really sweet. I think it works great as a one-shot
Look forward to reading more from you
| xXStrawberryBethXx chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
This story is amazing!
Seriously, I think that this could make even Stephenie Meyer proud!
You should write more, your a great author
| anythingzombie chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Awe, this was amazing.
Really cute and just so amazing.
| SquintandProud-x chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
I am totally in love with this one-shot. I really hope you make it into a novel-esque fic! Because, I have to say, I am desperatly wanting more!
I couldn't help the tears that welled up in my eyes - it was so beautiful. Especially Edward pulling out his wallet, asking if she had found a crib, even picking up the Lion (which I loved by the way!)
And how Bella just wanted to be like all the other parents. She had never really given much concern to being human, until she was pregnant. It was so beautiful. As you know, I love reading parent fics - when people are either pregnant or have a child. I love the love shared between the parent and child.
"I just couldn‘t bare the thought that I would die without having had even a small part in my baby‘s life.”
This line tugged at my heart strings the most.
As I said, I hope you write more - because I'm addicted 100%!
Thank you so much for writing something so beautiful and heart-warming!
Take care xx