Reviews for Not So Bad After All
gest chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
I am so happy Ethan got his eye back and that he and Luke ended up in Elysium
musicalgirl4474 chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
WOw, I really like good Luke.
JGS39 chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
It's brown. Ethan's eye is BROWN, Duzell-Reincarnated! Because he is JAPANESE-AMERICAN AND SO IT'S THAT TYPICAL BLACK HAIR-BROWN EYES COMBINATION (I DON'T CARE THAT HE IS A DEMIGOD!).

*takes breath* Ok, done ranting.

Great story.

-JGS39
Laura chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
just to let you know in the end Ethan tipped the balance Nemesis in your story didn't really have to give back the eye she already paid her debt to him
Dawn96 chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
Nicely wriiten! I loved the part where Luke felt his father and heard his words though he was dead- it was a very nice, unique touch.

Keep it up!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
Could be a little more descriptive, but really good!
ILuvPercabethMoreThanYou chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
Good I really liked it
Defiatos the Happy chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Good job, liked the Ethan thing at the end!
Zoe Nightshade chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Okay, actually, but I would suggest a better format. Also, you don't need to POV sign.
AJ chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
it was cute i really liked the Ethan thing!
only-a-classic-tune chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
this was beatiful
Lily chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
I like this a lot, no one ever seems to write about what happened after Luke died. Good job, you should write more.