Reviews for Dawn
feedthegrimmjows chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
I really liked this. It was very nicely written. Just beautiful. Great job!
Scereyaha chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
Short but very well written, Is this why you never have these two finally get together, because you feel that it can't work out and feel bad for them? ;p

This is very sad but the imagery is excellent and it is very emotive without being needlessly dramatic.

Its 2010 now and I would like to see more of your writing altogether, if you have the time and want to do it.
Mellow Penelo chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
This was beautiful. Not one word out of place. You delivered so much meaning and power into such a short piece.

Awesome, Thanks for writing this.
akatsuki41066 chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
I never enjoyed one shots because they were short but I must say you pull them off well.
delicate.desires chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
Sweet and short. (: I really liked it.
SnowLion no Miko chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
Wow. Amazing little fic you got here. I love the pairing of KisaSaku and this is really well written. Great job!
overlordofnobodies chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
I like it.
with eyes looking up chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
very insightful. i'm such a fan. :)
Jen Konoha chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
I love you for writing KisaxSaku!

So fringing on darkness this one.