This was interesting. I'd love to see a fully fleshed out story or two where this is put into great detail.

i read it again and when he said sorry there won't be next time my heart clench painfully. i hope you write sequel.

NOW I WANT A SEQUEL WHERE HARRY COMES BAAAAAAAACK!

Such a wonderfully done masterpiece.

oh my god oh my god this was İNCREDİBLE

it's a copy of itachi Uchiha's story but nonetheless beautiful
thank you for this wonderful story

good

Shit. I'm still crying, this is so beautiful and tragic!

thank you

OMG I feel like crying! that was amazing

It was horrible really. You didn't give an explanation in how BWL survives despite Lily being alive. You asked us it imagine it ourselves. Emotions aren't well written. You saw Naruto and thought it will be cool to apply it to HP. And didn't put any thought into it. It's just lazy work

This was so good! Harry is still a bad guy for the stuff he did but it was for the greater good, he wasn't cruel for cruelty sake and tried to do the best he could but he also wasn't against doing everything needed to succeed. Massive props for the skill it took to write in-between those lines.

lmfao i knew it was an itachi moment now im just fucking sad. this was really well done. but ultimately, it was dumbledore's desperation for a clue how to end this war that pushed harry to commit atrocities and war crimes. he used an 8 year olds idealism and heroics to become who he is in th e present.

This is the best one-shot I've ever read. You wrote a beautiful and meaningful story in just 15k works. You're a remarkable author!

Why am I crying?