Reviews for Harry Potter turns to the Lord
muckdawg13 chapter 1 . 6/2/2014
I must say, as a fellow Christian, this was... a bit odd. EVERYTHING in this story was rushed. You did not properly explain many things that were incredibly relevant to the story. Still, I admire your guts to stand up for what you believe in. I also believe that this may make Christians a laughingstock to some. This post was stereotypical of that of a disapproving, ignorant, hater Christian.
I believe that non-believers will use this as ammunition against Christians should the time come. But again, I applaud you for being unwavering in your relationship with the Lord.
GalactaBlazing chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
I laughed for a solid minute. Thanks!
Beverly O'Betty chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
There should be a Holocaust for Christians
Trollian-SirenSong chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Wow...This is bad...like really bad. Not because of the religious aspect(though that may be part of it) but because you did no research, know nothing of the series of books and just..please tell me this is a troll fanfic!
nagaruda chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
I personally do not agree with the message in this fanfic at all and I was told it was one of the wort fanfics on the internet, but I decided to go into it and try to ignore the message and only think of the quality of the writing.

First of all, Harry is little ooc. Perhaps you should have tried to think more of his character before writing this?

Also, you rush into describing Harry's decision to convert to Christianity. You make him turn away from his friends and those he considers a family and listen to a complete stranger with little to no contemplation. You make his decision way too quick to be believable and the dreams seem like a very poor and cliche motivation.

I also found the plot to be very flat due to the lack of internal turmoil over his decision. The fact that the plot is so ridiculously simple it probably fails to catch the attention of an audience other than children. In fact, it is very reminiscent of a children's book, but I can only assume from the theme of it that was not your intention.

And last of all, I thought that it was way too short. If you had taken the time and energy to make it longer, the quality probably would have improved tremendously because you would have more room to catch the reader's attention with a more complicated plot, and you would have more room to argue your point.

Overall, I found this be a very poorly written fanfic even aside from the message in it.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
Quite a different take.
Queen Katrina the Seafarer chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
You've probably gotten so many reviews and I read them all. So, I know what to say without being redundant hopefully. I can see how this may have stopped you from writing more, but continue. It has promise. I'm not saying my works are oh so great, in fact, the first thing I published had a blatant Mary Sue in it. Here's the thing, you can have Christ in your stories, but work Him in gently. A few chapters of adventures of Harry realizing how Jesus is real or something, I don't know.

People have told you not to review your own stories. It's true. Don't review. However, I think back when, that was how it worked to respond to a review, however, you praised your story in your review. But, since you are an internet being, you could have had somebody on your account who typed in for you. Just make sure it is not your name.

I know you're tired of the "do your research" agenda. You should. Not gonna lie. Gotta due research with whatever you're writing.

Your grammar and spelling are pretty spot on, but, try to work a bit on style and the like. However, it was fairly okay in that department.

This is not a flame, it is supposed to be a constructive review. The story has some promise. With work it will be better. Keep writing. It's not bad. Trust me. I've read worse. You can be so much better though, you just gotta keep at it. :)
ExpiredCheese chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
PARAISE JEEEZUSAH!
Lioness Deity chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
Haters hate it. I like it, actually. I love religion. I'm a bit religious myself.
Some pendejito chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
stop writing bad stuff about this story the story was good and very well written, dont say that is bad because it has a good emssage and there h¿shoul be more stories like this.
Vincent chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
This is a steamy pile of shit. Bad, pretentious propaganda.

The author not only dares use the name of a saint as his pseudonym, he also reviewed his own story and called it a masterpiece.

As the Fan Fiction Critic pointed out...this is arrogant and prideful. And thus a sin. Yup.

The story itself is badly written and dull.
So, in the end ? Shame on you, go fuck yourself, and go get some human decency.

Also, witchcraft does not exist. DUH. Nobody has ever been able to use magic, and nobody will ever be able to. Try to work on your delusions, pal.
PyreSakura-Chan chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
Are. You. Serious?! You broke the Number One RULE of Fanfiction: NEVER -and I repeat- NEVER! mix religion with ANYTHING!Not ANIME, not MOVIES, NOT EVEN THE BOOKS! Troll or not, this is the SICKEST THING YOU EVER DID! I'm not a fan of the series, but even I THINK this is not only atrocious, OOC, but you fit in PERFECTLY with the stereotype of Overly-Religious NUTJOBS!- And don't say you're not, because I have seen them myself in my OWN CHURCH I used to go to.

You know what? Don't bother writing anymore fanfics if THIS is what's going to turn up!

Thank you and have a nice LIFE, you Prideful Prick.
Rrit chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Unlike some flamers I want to give you some constructive criticism.

Harry is OoC, I have seen plenty of HP fanfiction where Harry's religious and that's all fine and good but it's your writing what I have the biggest issue with.

You have: "I refuse to believe it. Regardless of the nightmares I am suffering, I will not lower myself to the level of a lowly muggle!"

Harry would never say that! his maternal family is a 'lowly muggle' and his best friend's Dad is a muggle rights activist! That sounds suspiciously like Draco...

Dumbledore is the HEADMASTER not any day to day Professor! Just because you have a nightmare repetitively doesn't mean for someone to take time off. I had thought that Harry was going to commit suicide(He practically invites himself to it when he decides to just play hooky and fly over the ocean!). The most likely option that Dumbledore would have done was for Harry to go to the Hospital Wing and get a sleeping drought.
Get your facts right!

And in your fanfiction, how old is Harry? When does this take place in his timeline? if it doesn't it's AU.

but I admire you boldness :) that's all that I can give you because of all the incorrect information you have.

What were Harry's dreams about? Why where they nightmares? Tell us! We can gather nothing from 'I have nightmares and delusions'

Always Writing,
-Rrit
MANFREDvonMANSEX chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
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