|Reviews for In between Pain and Family|
| dazzled eyes22 chapter 4 . 2/2/2010
Thanks for the heads up in the authors' note to where this chapter fits. It was interesting to see the difference when Bella interacted with Alice then the change when Jasper came in and Alice mentioned Forks. I liked the conversation that Jasper had with Alice about leaving Bella alone which then led to him talking about seeing Edward at the conference. I loved Emmett and his playing with his cousin and joking with father about not undercooking the meat. The proposal was very romantic. Thanks for another great outtake!
“Hey, Dad, are you sure you’re cooking that right? I don’t want my meat undercooked like last time. You could practically hear them mooing with each bite.”-best line
| Twilightobsessed09 chapter 4 . 1/27/2010
So very good...
Thanks for this...
| latuacantante4him chapter 4 . 1/18/2010
| HopeStreet chapter 4 . 1/18/2010
Thank you for these stories. I like the bit of back story with this one about Alice and Jasper with Edward and Bella and their stories on the periphery.
| DICATAKADD chapter 4 . 1/18/2010
That was the sweetest thing ever...
| twilightnaley19 chapter 4 . 1/18/2010
AW I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. LOVED ALICE'S POV. UPDATE SOON!
| lanigirl96003 chapter 4 . 1/17/2010
why is edward away from the family i re read last chapter and i dont understand ! cant wait till the next chapter
| Bammers chapter 4 . 1/17/2010
that was woderful thanks for sharing it with us...
| ArwenGranger chapter 3 . 12/15/2009
Aw what a lovely surprise for Bella at the end!
| Lurecyka chapter 3 . 11/20/2009
What a nice surprise... that was really good !
| dazzled eyes22 chapter 3 . 11/9/2009
It was so sad when Edward left Bella to go to work early. Bella overcoming her insecurity of being separated from Edward to reach out to call Alice was such a great step in her recovery. I loved the surprise reveal of Edward at that party. Great writing!
| dazzled eyes22 chapter 2 . 11/9/2009
Alice really got her wish to give Edward and Bella her idea of the perfect romantic week. It was nice to watch them take a break from their busy schedules, take their minds off the past and spend some quality time together. I love their gift exchange scene. It was really sweet.
| dazzled eyes22 chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
What a beautiful birthday! It was nice to see everyone rally around to celebrate Bella's birthday.
| cshorte chapter 3 . 11/4/2009
| HopeStreet chapter 3 . 11/2/2009
That was a sweet, intimate and heartfelt gift. It reminds me how much I miss this story.