Reviews for Desecration
S-murderinc chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
acw1 chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
I like it so far. I like this Edward. Possibly more true to his intended nature. Look forward to more.
Shadowbox N. Paperchase chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Great start.

Loved how Edward referred to Bella as 'my Bella'. Possessive Edward is always smoking hot!

Look forward to the next chapter.

LindyP chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
I think this is shaping up to be a really great story! I dare say you could definately make it longer if you want to. I am looking forward to reading the next chapter of this tory & a "darker" Edward. Like the idea of the fangs! Of course, I really love your other story too, There Will be Blood. You have a great talent for writing!

LindyP :)
kakuya chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
I love this story so much. I can't waitto see where this story is going to go!
weisyloveslemons chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
I was really getting into it when it was over and wished there was more so good job. I really liked it and I’m not usually one to read period pieces but I like where you are going with this. Very interesting and it has caught my attention. I can’t wait to see where it leads.
flecour chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
I think its fantastic! Im so sike to see how it all plays out! )
Corr5092 chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Historical fics are great when written're doing a good job so far
hayleyhoo chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
WOW This is just brilliant :D I loved it
GabzR chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
wow just wow cant wait to read more
Jennmc75 chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Very interesting. I like the ideas you are working with and can't wait to see where you go with it.
rms33 chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
I think you did an awesome job.

I can't wait to read more.
australianvamp chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
edward better not be "serviced" by Tanya, Victoria or any other girl...

keep up the writing
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