|Reviews for Xun|
| kiuna'yukina chapter 9 . 11/9/2013
I love the way you venture into the Mass Effect universe. Joker in particular is one of my favorite characters ever and I loved the elaboration you were able to give him. I'd be greatly receptive of any future strikes of inspiration you'd have regarding him. Til then, I'll enjoy the rest of your Mass Effect creations.
| raichu100 chapter 9 . 5/6/2013
This is so awesome. Thank you for writing it! Joker is one of my favorite characters from the game, and I adore the way you've written him in your series and expanded on him in Xun.
| Eleneri chapter 9 . 2/6/2013
This was, to my surprise, not outside my fanfic comfort zone, as it was just something I wouldn't normally take time to read. The fact that I glanced over the first three paragraphs and was hooked for nine chapters, and am genuinely lamenting the end of this roller coaster ride you crafted with such expertise is a testament to just how damn good a writer you are. I would like to live up to the high standard you set; frankly, I don't think I can. This is good. This is great. This is amazing. It is vivid and breathes. I will never be so foolish as to look at Joker as a secondary character again.
Thank you for gifting your readers with this story.
| Eleneri chapter 8 . 2/6/2013
Ohmigosh. Joker, for a noncombat kinda guy, you are absolutely flipping amazing. But dropping off a support pillar... Oh boy...
*punches the next button*
| Eleneri chapter 6 . 2/6/2013
Eeep! Cliffhanger! Mass accelerated particles?
*punches the "next" button with more force than necessary*
| Eleneri chapter 5 . 2/6/2013
Fascinating chapter! I love the application of Joker's humor to everything; for a man so physically hemmed in, his personality is the absolute opposite. Meanwhile, poor Kaidan is the opposite of Joker - physically gifted, mentally straightjacketed. And they both orbit around Shepard, who drops some of her ablative plating and shows her emotions once in a while.
This is like Mass Effect meets James Bond. Seriously cool!
| Eleneri chapter 2 . 2/6/2013
Joker. Is. AMAZING!
So glad to see him get a good spot in the limelight, and in such spectacular fashion!
| Eleneri chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
Whoa. Now I know why I hate going to parties. Of course, if this happened at any party, and you passed out popcorn and little rally flags with "Shepard" and "Joker" on them, I'd definitely go.
Unremittingly badass moments from Shepard, and Joker actually disarmed people with his voice only. Now, who was the waiter?
| MagyarEagle chapter 9 . 6/7/2011
This story is worthy of being official Mass Effect fiction. It was that well written.
| palkia chapter 2 . 3/16/2011
amazing! thanks for posting
| Mirima chapter 9 . 2/16/2011
I found this by looking at another authors favorites. I really love it, read all but two chapters in one night, then finished it the next morning. The whole time I read this I could see in my mind what you were describing and the voices of the actors. Well done.
| Janizary chapter 9 . 11/24/2010
Definitely on the favorites list.
Action, intrigue, fluff, earth bugs, anti-biotic (wait, can I say it that way?) Tong(s), and Joker stuck in the middle of it.
I continue to appreciate Tennyson's character. Nice offset.
Joker's scene with Jin was nicely done. When Jeff realized what they had really done in leaving him with Jin...
BTW, I'm voting for church bells ;) Of course, knowing the spoilers for ME2, and a certain pilot’s actions on the collector base, that’s an easy bet.
| Tikigod784 chapter 9 . 10/7/2010
So awesome. I really love your stories, even if I prefer a different Shepard pairing. Very good work.
| kinsley5 chapter 9 . 9/30/2010
| Sarg chapter 6 . 9/26/2010
Very well written. I love the way you write Joker, I can actually listen him saying this stuff while I read. And I also love the kind of platonic love he had for Ashley.
Keep the good work!