Reviews for American Gangster
Allana Rose chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Umm umm umm. Can you make this into a series? Please? I like it... And damnit... Don't do that to me. Butthead. I loved it!
skittleAcullen chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
o dis story is sexy but u should be careful wen writing this story espicaly wen tlkin boud gangs like bllod an crips thing kan get people shot be careful but nice story regardless
Sheeijan chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
I love all the slang you used, it made it so much more fun to read! I love how Bella isn't a naive little innocent girl here, she knows her stuff and she's not afraid to show it.

Thanks for writing! This contest is going to be great!
JSTEW chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
That. Was. Amazing.
Oo Livia Cullen oO chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Wow! I really loved it! So far, it's the best I've read from the Age Contest even though you're not entering! I loved Ganster mafia Edward, he's hot and sexy when he's all bad boy, dangerous and controlling! I also loved the fact that you didn't make Bella a mindless twat! You gave her a temper and I loved that she didn't give in easy!
ElleCC chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Oh, I really liked it. Fantastic job with the lingo and everything. Really great example for everyone.

And the end was just *perfect*. Goosebumps and all.
lorit chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
LOVED IT! It was awesome, totally hot and great. Thanks!
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