|Reviews for American Gangster|
| skittleAcullen chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
o dis story is sexy but u should be careful wen writing this story espicaly wen tlkin boud gangs like bllod an crips thing kan get people shot be careful but nice story regardless
| Sheeijan chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
I love all the slang you used, it made it so much more fun to read! I love how Bella isn't a naive little innocent girl here, she knows her stuff and she's not afraid to show it.
Thanks for writing! This contest is going to be great!
| JSTEW chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
That. Was. Amazing.
| Oo Livia Cullen oO chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Wow! I really loved it! So far, it's the best I've read from the Age Contest even though you're not entering! I loved Ganster mafia Edward, he's hot and sexy when he's all bad boy, dangerous and controlling! I also loved the fact that you didn't make Bella a mindless twat! You gave her a temper and I loved that she didn't give in easy!
| ElleCC chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Oh, I really liked it. Fantastic job with the lingo and everything. Really great example for everyone.
And the end was just *perfect*. Goosebumps and all.
| lorit chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
LOVED IT! It was awesome, totally hot and great. Thanks!