Reviews for Decision
Danny Barefoot chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
Aww, Limelda, always obssessing over Madlax. Nice relationship summary, really liked it.
Pomegranate chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
I like this dissection of the scene you're describing. It's insightful, and I like your writing. Not only that, but it explores a relationship a lot of people don't think about (and that, in fact, wasn't really mentioned a lot in the source material). There's just one small thing you could improve on, and that's your grammar. Specifically, your punctuation. But that's something that can be fixed easily. :)