|Reviews for Consolidated|
| DemonDragonQueen chapter 9 . 5/10
I reaally like this story! I don't care if the characters are OOC or not, it's too sweet. Good job, and I have hopes that you'll update soon, even if it has been a few years. XD
| BlazeingEcho chapter 9 . 8/26/2014
I love it LOVE IT LOVE it!
| LeFay Strent chapter 8 . 7/3/2012
Aw, Havoc's such a kid at heart. XD
| LeFay Strent chapter 6 . 7/3/2012
YAY! Hughes isn't dead! I was worried there for a minute.
| LeFay Strent chapter 5 . 7/3/2012
ENVY! HUGHES! WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?
| LeFay Strent chapter 4 . 7/3/2012
I LOVE HAVOC!
| LeFay Strent chapter 2 . 7/3/2012
When Hawkeye pulled out her gun and threatened to shoot Ed...I CRACKED UP! I was laughing at that for at least ten minutes before I could calm down and continue reading. That was freaking hilarious!
| LeFay Strent chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Ooooh, this is good! When Havoc showed up I was bouncing in my seat and cheering!
| Bre chapter 4 . 4/5/2011
Aaaawww! I really really really liked this chapter alot! It was so cute but also sad to know what Ed was feeling. It makes me sad that he blames himself for eveything.
| cattychan09 chapter 7 . 3/6/2011
...You do know that Thanksgiving is an AMERICAN holiday, right?
| anonymous baka chapter 4 . 3/6/2011
WHOA. Havoc ROCKS! XD
This is awesome. there should be more fics like this.
Some contructive criticism: the grammar /could/ be better, but it's not NEARLY enough to interfere with the plot. trust me, there are some true horrors out there. it doesn't bug me, i just have a weird knack for spotting these things.
i would be ALL OVER that museum. sorry, history freak here XP
Wow, i sound like such a nerd... -_-;;
must be insomnia or something. well, good nite. _
| The Curse of Forever chapter 9 . 7/25/2010
So far so good, I think Ed really does need people to look up to and who support him. Great work and I can't wait to see more from you.
| ruby890 chapter 9 . 7/1/2010
that was sooo cute. loved it was not expecting the punch.
| major ed groupie chapter 2 . 4/26/2010
Great story but honey his name is Falman that is with an l not an r.
| toushiro1310 chapter 8 . 3/26/2010
yay! happy ed! I like happy ed. But I also like angsty ed... so hard to choose!