Reviews for Consolidated
DemonDragonQueen chapter 9 . 5/10/2015
I reaally like this story! I don't care if the characters are OOC or not, it's too sweet. Good job, and I have hopes that you'll update soon, even if it has been a few years. XD
BlazeingEcho chapter 9 . 8/26/2014
I love it LOVE IT LOVE it!
LeFay Strent chapter 8 . 7/3/2012
Aw, Havoc's such a kid at heart. XD
LeFay Strent chapter 6 . 7/3/2012
YAY! Hughes isn't dead! I was worried there for a minute.
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LeFay Strent chapter 4 . 7/3/2012
LeFay Strent chapter 2 . 7/3/2012
When Hawkeye pulled out her gun and threatened to shoot Ed...I CRACKED UP! I was laughing at that for at least ten minutes before I could calm down and continue reading. That was freaking hilarious!
LeFay Strent chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Ooooh, this is good! When Havoc showed up I was bouncing in my seat and cheering!
Bre chapter 4 . 4/5/2011
Aaaawww! I really really really liked this chapter alot! It was so cute but also sad to know what Ed was feeling. It makes me sad that he blames himself for eveything.
cattychan09 chapter 7 . 3/6/2011
...You do know that Thanksgiving is an AMERICAN holiday, right?
anonymous baka chapter 4 . 3/6/2011

This is awesome. there should be more fics like this.

Some contructive criticism: the grammar /could/ be better, but it's not NEARLY enough to interfere with the plot. trust me, there are some true horrors out there. it doesn't bug me, i just have a weird knack for spotting these things.

i would be ALL OVER that museum. sorry, history freak here XP

Wow, i sound like such a nerd... -_-;;

must be insomnia or something. well, good nite. _
The Curse of Forever chapter 9 . 7/25/2010
So far so good, I think Ed really does need people to look up to and who support him. Great work and I can't wait to see more from you.
ruby890 chapter 9 . 7/1/2010
that was sooo cute. loved it was not expecting the punch.
major ed groupie chapter 2 . 4/26/2010
Great story but honey his name is Falman that is with an l not an r.
toushiro1310 chapter 8 . 3/26/2010
yay! happy ed! I like happy ed. But I also like angsty ed... so hard to choose!
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