|Reviews for Of Kings and Pawns|
| Yoon Jeonghan 1004 chapter 12 . 5/26
i read this chapter already in the past. didn't i? or it just sounds similar
| LadyTeldra chapter 2 . 4/11
Schneizel makes my stomach do flips. -.- This fic is entirely evil.
| My Solitude chapter 11 . 1/18
| Quinn1989 chapter 3 . 11/7/2015
As stated in my previous comment.
Lelouch would not allow himself to become a tool.
He would rather die.
So the only reason for him to do this all is if he has a master plan.
Orter wise it is so OOC it is not even funny.
| Quinn1989 chapter 2 . 11/7/2015
Good fit but for a few things.
While I think Lelouch uninterested in the throne, as long as he can create Nunallys world even uninterested in all things, he is far to soon joining and trusting Schneizel.
(I only can imagine he has a plan to be in control once more, anything else is so far OOC it would not even be funny)
| StrawberryDemon chapter 12 . 9/27/2015
This story is amazing! O.O thank you so much for making it!
| StrangeDefiance chapter 12 . 8/9/2015
Loved the story! Write some more.
| Amu4ever chapter 1 . 8/4/2015
How I hate seeing Lelouch so degraded. He doesn't deserve this...and Suzaku is an ass.
| 777angeloflove chapter 12 . 7/9/2015
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/30/2015
Am I the only one who got the reference about Black Butler on chapter 11?
| ShizuBABE chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
Mmmmm delicious... Gonna read the rest :)
| Azera-v chapter 11 . 9/18/2014
| Jellyfish Princess chapter 12 . 8/3/2014
Now that I have finished the story, I think the story improved as it went on. The characterisation was better although I still think you have Schneizel way off. Lelouch improved noticeably but I think in certain situations (smut) his character went out of the window. Overall the story seemed just way too generic and cliche, like everything turned out well with no serious consequences, which takes away from the realism.
And one of the biggest issues is that you call this 'romance'. Why does Schneizel continue to call Lelouch a 'prize'? Seriously, why? What kind of relationship works that way? An unhealthy, abusive one that is. Yet apparently Schneizel 'loves' Lelouch ugh. The second biggest issue was the smut. It felt sort of disconnected from the story, their personalities seemed to change into copypasta seme-uke genericism. The actual smut was fairly well-written but it didn't feel part of the story. Smut like that is more suited to one-shots, not a multi-chapter story where everything is intertwined together.
I'd give the whole story a 5 out of 10. It had the potential to be great but (because the author probably watches/reads too much shite yaoi) failed to deliver.
| Jellyfish Princess chapter 5 . 7/26/2014
I have to say I'm pretty disappointed so far. I feel like I'm reading a generic trashy yaoi manga, a stereotypical seme ans stereotypical uke with the names 'Schneizel' and 'Lelouch'. I feel like you've completely degraded them as characters. Whenever Schneizel calls Lelouch a 'prize' I fucking cringe. I mean wtf? Who says that anyway? Oh yeah a generic seme.
No, I don't miss the porn like you. I thought it was pretty abrupt and unrealistic how it happened just like that, without any real emotion in it. I didn't come here for pwp you know.
...I guess a story with good characterization and plot is too much to ask for. Thought I will finish this and give a review on it all at the end.
| lenxann chapter 12 . 6/23/2014
Love schneizal x lulu 3
this plot is 3