|Reviews for Sweet Attack|
| Frosty Wolf chapter 14 . 1/10
Dark, violent, crazy, totally Black Lagoon. Well done.
| kingrichard360 chapter 14 . 11/27/2013
it's been ages since I last read a good BL story. kudos
| ThePhenakism chapter 14 . 10/28/2013
Pretty amazing story, well worth the read.
| PinkSangria chapter 14 . 10/10/2013
Damn, this was good. This is one of the best, BEST, black lagoon fanfictions I've read! Great job! I loved this work!
| Fluffyman chapter 14 . 8/24/2013
Great story, enjoyed it. Thanks.
| Dark Kuno chapter 14 . 7/11/2013
I love how everyone is completely and totally believable and in character throughout.
And thank you for not making this a sappy ending. Bittersweet is really the only thing that feels right in Roanapur.
| Stardiouses chapter 14 . 3/30/2013
I will try to explain what I thought with my bad English.
At first I love everything, the sonic cannon part, Revy and Rock beggining, Chang and Balalaika's relation (even thought I have never thought about it), the plot, the way you alternated every story, etc.
Then i started feeling just a little bit uncomfortable with the idea of Revy being out of the business and living a "pacefull" life with Rock. I mean, it was Rock's aim from the beggining and nothing against that, but it doesn't feel right.
But the last chapter was the perfect ending that the fanfic needed and that I wasn't even expecting. So, standing ovation for the best fanfic of Black Lagoon :D
| Allora Gale chapter 14 . 2/1/2013
Holy crap I loved this story. It was excellent. I think you brought both couples together realistically without forcing the issue. Excellent work. Kudos.
| Tales from the Lee chapter 14 . 1/25/2013
Just finished this story. I can say that it is definitely one of my favorites in general and an amazing work for the Black Lagoon fandom. It seems to be well educated with the base lore and does a good job of establishing characters beyond the initial.
It isn't perfect, there are a few typing errors but beyond that this story is damn near as close to a flawless portrayal as you can get for the fandom.
I don't want to give away spoilers too much but I would definitely recommend that fans of the series take a look at this story. It builds very well off of the concepts that are thematic cores to the series.
Rokuro Okajima, the most dangerous man in Roanapur.
This story shows off the meaning to that line of canon dialogue.
| Heavychop chapter 4 . 11/30/2012
I love this sooooo damn much! By the way, it's Lotton the Wizard not Rotton. Sounds like Rotten... LOL
The whole thing is nicely chained up and makes complete sense! That's what I love about this story And the way you bring the story to life, only one word for it: fantastic. Hats off to your writting skill.
| Whitakker chapter 14 . 11/14/2012
This has got to be the best BL fic I've had the pleasure of reading. I can see this happening in canon so easily, its incredible. I enjoy the idea of not precisely having a "happily ever after" ending...after all, this is BL we're talking here. "Happily ever after" does not exist in Roanapur's vernacular.
Loved it, favorited it, and now will be looking at your other works in the future. Consider myself on your bandwagon.
| Hachichiyyin chapter 14 . 8/30/2012
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/25/2012
Good story, really felt true for the characters. Loved the fight scenes and how Rock resolved all of this.
Thank you for sharing this.
| xXChibitalyXx chapter 7 . 7/23/2012
...This review comes really late, doesnt it? I have to apologize... -.- I try to be a bit faster next time.
Other than that, I just need to say: Yes, yes, a thousand times YES! for the scene between Rock and Revy. I actually thought for a minute she would shoot him. But now theres no way Rock will fail in his quest to end this war. So yeah, Im positive all the major characters survive your story. ;)
And I wanted to add how much I love this part:
"Roanapur smelled like wet cigarettes and diesel exhaust, but beyond that, Rock could taste the clean notes of ocean brine and hibiscus blossoms. Like Revy, Roanapur had her own hard beauty if you cared to look for it."
Comparing Revy and Roanapur just...fits, you know? I dont really know how to explain it, but it does.
...I might have an inkling what Rocks up to...Im not sure, I could be wrong. I hope you explain his plan at the end of the story. (And what the hell did Rotton do that Shenhua threw him out? o.O)
As I said, I try to comment faster next time. Until then, bye! :)
| xXChibitalyXx chapter 6 . 7/2/2012
A chapter that has Revy as its focus, nice. ;) I was already wondering what she was up to. Although Rock isnt the only one who disapproves of her living on pills and other stuff. We all want to have her around for a bit longer, after all!
Again, wonderful work with your flashback, it simply fits into the actual canon storyline. Seems like Chang isnt the inhuman scumbag Rock thinks he is, after all...But damn, Revy really had a hard time even in Roanapur at the beginning, no?
I tried my hardest not to cringe at the conversation between Rock and Revy. Of course shes not going to get him away with that. Although I still hope he manages to convince her that hes telling the truth...Still, he Rock should have known she wouldnt immediatly throw herself into his arms, but well...love, I guess.
Review for chapter seven should follow in the next few days. ;)