Reviews for Edward's Fight
hit-the-duckies chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
aw

i loved this story. and this was one of my favorite chapters. it was great to see it from edwards POV.

thank you!
Cymbeliness chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Aww! Yay! Great one!
amymorgan chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Wonderful. Loved his "primal rage" at the club!
babylopez2008 chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
ah! I loved it!

I totally forgot they got "dirrty" at the club..lol

I felt Edward's emotion. You did awesome!
frol chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
loved this! Love Edward's POV. Thanks so much for writing it!
kcullenk chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
whichever point of view i read, i always cry on this chapter. everything's perfect. They are perfect for each other!
SharonMacross chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Your words are poetry.

TRE win!
jezzeria chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
this made me so much more emotional in his pov. *sniffles*
becp chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
oh god that was hot really that scene in the nightclub where she gives him a lap dance and they both end up cuming that was hot that was an excellent story cant wait for more
seraphslastkiss chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
That is so sweet. Edward's POV of the proposal. Seriously sweet. I always love getting both point of views. Excellent job ;)
Liz chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Beautifully written as always.
SuchABlue chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
This was so freaking perfect. I'm glad that this was the chapter that everyone picked. And it was totally worth the 40 minutes I spent after reading it trying to figure out how deaf people think stuff if they've never heard sounds. Seriously though, do they think in pictures only?
BellaCullenPR chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
aw I love it
Twilightgirl1918 chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Dang, you were right edward is very wordy. really good, and you are doing the rest of the story in his pov too right? i cant remember if you already said that or its just wishful thinking...lol
EC4me chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
That was excellent. I'd love to read any other outtakes you might come up with too.
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