Reviews for Black Orchid
Lord Lelouch chapter 6 . 7/11/2014
I know I have already stated this in my PM to you but this is quite a good story.

I do however dislike the fact that you had Padme sleep with another man during the time she believed that Anakin was Darth Vader. It really bites and boils my blood at the thought of another man sleeping with Padme. I'm very very sure that Anakin is going to hate that particular fact when he finds out and he is going to be unreasonable about it.

On that note can you please consider having Anakin taking (and Padme allowing it) a mistress or another lover for a short anount of time after the revelation that she had been sleeping with Caid. I really dislike the fact that in many Ani/Padme stories she get to sleep with other guys and is forgiven while Anakin is the one who has always remained faithful.

So if it is not too much to ask can you have Anakin have a sexual relationship with another woman before he allows himself and Padme to truly heal. Because if she get to sleep with another man and get away with it then surely he also deserves to get even with her.(regardless of the reason she slept with Caid in the first place)

So please have Anakin take a mistress or another lover for sometime before he and Padme truly manage to heal and Padme accepting that it is something that Anakin needs to do if he is ever going to be able to forgive her for Caid and that they truly begin to heal. Because there really is no way Anakin will accept, understand or forgive Padme sleeping with Caid without having some sort of compromise made.

Unless of course you had Anakin sleep with Catana-Si during the 6 months he was with her, then I suppose it would be alright, but if not I request thatt you PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE have Anakin take a mistress for a short amount of time.

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Geor-Geor Binks chapter 6 . 6/20/2014
Woah...DUN-DUN-DUUN! This is a really great story,I'm really loving it so ,Luke's a brat!(; But here's an idea for the it has been like,2 years...u there at all?Can't wait to see what happens Naboo really gone?I'd like to think that Organa is bluffing...
Guest chapter 6 . 5/29/2014
Almost two years plase post another chapter!
Vivss chapter 6 . 2/11/2014
This story is really good! I hope you plan to continue it!
I wonder what Anakin's reaction will br when he finds out about Caid...
Vivss chapter 5 . 2/10/2014
It's incredible how Padme became such a skilled Jedi in such a short time...
I like how you wrote both Padme and Anakin's denial of each other's existance.
Vivss chapter 3 . 2/9/2014
I loved all the action provided by Anakin here!
I think I've never read a fanfic that had Anakin being so powerful and smart without him getting close to the dark side, so I'm really enjoying it.
Vivss chapter 2 . 2/9/2014
This story is great so far!
I like how you wrote the jump Anakin had to make as representative of the changes he faced in the six months.
aprilfoolsyou chapter 6 . 10/19/2013
It was getting good... ;_;
Guest chapter 6 . 10/7/2013
Will you be updating this wonderful story of yours? Its been over a year now...
Guest chapter 6 . 4/23/2013
Please update your wonderful story soon... please?
suchThomas chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Are you going to finish it? Would be nice 3
Mo Angel chapter 6 . 1/3/2013
Any thought of updating this well written story?
ForeverFireandIce chapter 6 . 9/25/2012
awwww i feel so bad for anakin, luke is so protective but its so sad. But i love how immediatly leia turns into a daddys girl(:
ShatteredDestiny chapter 6 . 9/7/2012
Holy crap, you're alive! It been so long I totally forgot about this fic. Keep it up, mate!
Mo chapter 6 . 9/3/2012
Wow, thanks for the update and so soon! This had me absolutely teary eyed. Love that the essence of the characters is true, but their individual horrors have made them harder. Looking forward to much more... Thank you again.
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