|Reviews for NMTB Extras|
| Ms. Leading08 chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
I love this. Plain and simple.
At first, I kind of wished there was more detail, but then again I don't.
It's like Edward can't think of details like what they're saying and stuff because he's so taken with Bella. Usually, it's just Bella swooning and fainting; but this time it's Edward that's in a trance. The little ways that he compared her smile to the stars and how her words were water in the desert; that shit's amazing! lol.
I really can't wait for him to describe their further...encounters. I have a feeling that he is one conflicted fellow inside that pretty head of his ;)
| tmt4life chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
I really enjoyed having some insight into Edwards mind, keep on going!
| Snix1974 chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Looking forward to reading more from you x x
| twifan7731 chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
WOW - that was great to see inside of his head. It makes the story even better! Please, please keep it up! I can't wait to read more. Of both sides!
| keepingupwiththekids chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Can Edward come out and play! I love THIS Edward! I am a huge fan!
| LisaLew chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
OMG so excited for this. You do a great job of comparing Bella to a human version of a singer, using lots of subtle references to vamp!Edward. I guess I'm sort of surprised that there wasn't something more wrong with his marriage besides just typical boredom, but I imagine now that these feelings have been unlocked in him he and wifey will likely start fighting a bit as I imagine he may start to resent her because he really wants to be with Bella. Ooh, I'm speculating again, I'll stop that.
Anyway, great great writing! Can't wait for the next one.
| 2402a chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
I love it and I don't hate him anymore
| n0 l0nger in use chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
He couldn't resist the temptation. Does Jake work there? Is he his brother-in-law?
| bellawhitlock51 chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Yay! I love it!
I definitely understand Edward a bit more now :)
I'm gonna head over and read the new 1st and 2nd chapters now :)
This is fantastic and I can't wait for the next update!
| edwardrocksmysocks chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
I do love EPOV...I'm glad you decided to give us these extras. Can't wait to read more.
| Tina Wannabe-Cullen chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
thx for giving us snippets of EPOV :)
| bemily chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Yea - I was really courious as to what was up with him, his thoughts on the affair and the state of his marriage. And since this is from his POV and not Jake's and I am optimistic that maybe it is meant to be and there will be a HEA? Reguardless I am excited for the outtakes and eventually new updates. THANKS!
| Sweetdreams82 chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Nice. Idiot. Selfish bastard. I notice he thinks about taking whatever he can get from Bella. He never stops to think about what he is willing to offer, to give to Bella. Like I said, selfish. He seems like he has been a mindless drone up to this point, following the map someone else laid out for his life without concern about the journey or the destination. Update soon!
| rms33 chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
This is fantastic thank you so much!
I can't wait for the next chapter.
| dolphin62598 chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
WO! That was GREAT girl! I LOVED it! I can't wait to read more about him and what's going on in his first life! He's such a mystery! Great job!