Reviews for Another Girl, Another Vampire
Leah Reid Whitlock chapter 5 . 7/26/2013
PLEASE UPDATE!
xentrya chapter 5 . 3/5/2013
No other chapter for this story...?
xentrya chapter 4 . 3/5/2013
Awesome chapter! Loved it:)Amazing intrigue:) Bella being bitten by a rival clan...what a fabulous idea:) Good work on this chapter Ash:)
xentrya chapter 3 . 3/5/2013
The Bat mobile:))))) LOL :)))) This is getting a bit strange...they are all toooo friendly...? I wonder what's that all about:)
xentrya chapter 2 . 3/5/2013
Hm...This is getting interesting:) There are definitely sparks between Bella and Jasper:) Ps: that was the beginning of a very promising love scene...nasty:)
xentrya chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Wow! Edward and Alice! No way! You're evil girl!:))) I like it :))) Hmmm...I wonder if this means that Bella would be hooking up with Jasper then...:)
missjasperwhitlockcullenhale chapter 5 . 12/31/2010
please wit more this storys amazing please hurry and write more
DownWithDumbles chapter 5 . 12/7/2010
can't wait to see where you take this story, just don't make it Bella/Edward. was beginning to become Bella/Jasper, and would like to see it to continue so
BVB Soldier chapter 5 . 2/5/2010
Please keep going. Please.
Alexandria Grace chapter 5 . 7/9/2009
I really like where this story is going! Can't wait to see what the Cullens do...

P.S. can you try to not to center everything in the chapters, 'cause it makes it harder to read...
ScarlettLovesRhett chapter 5 . 6/24/2009
Hey sis. Great story keep it up. Here's a few ideas that I promised you. 1: What if Bella joined the bad vampes just to make Edward joules for sleeping with Alice and then she can't get herself free from them and she's stuck there forever or until Edward relizes that he still loves Bella and so he goes and saves bella killing all the vampes. Or 2: The bad vampes kidnape Bella and hold her hostage and tells the Cullens that they will kill Bella unless they get something in return and that would be Edward and Bella is telling Edward not to but then the phone or what ever goes dead before the Cullens can find out where Bella is. Oh and they only have like three to four days to find her or its to late.

That's all I have for now. What do you think? Keep it up on the amazing story I know you can do it:)
ScarlettLovesRhett chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
OH MY GOSH! I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT HAPPENED THAT WAS JUST OH...MY GOSH! I CAN'T BELIEVE EDWARD AND ALICE! SHOCKED LOOK ON MY FACE RIGHT NOW!
GingerMarauderette chapter 5 . 6/23/2009
This is a great story idea and I like where it's going, but I do have some critsims. The spelling and grammar needs serious fixing. It's a little rambley and the puntuation is pretty bad. I don't know if this Samantha-whatsthername's doing or yours, but you should seriously have someone check it over before you post it

Reb
GleeFreak-VampireChik chapter 5 . 6/5/2009
I hope you update soon...and get the RIGHT couples together again! Its weird with Jasper and Bella! Update soon, and fix it! Please and Thank you!
barbiedoll123 chapter 5 . 6/4/2009
so edward and bella will somehow make up and be together ,if they do they have to past who they both slept with
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