|Reviews for The Apprentice Audition|
| Guest chapter 12 . 11/14/2013
| meg527 chapter 12 . 6/14/2013
Very interesting story so far!
| Rebakah chapter 12 . 6/3/2013
This is original. Looking forward to seeing more! I especially like the causal friendship of the Trio. And who would suspect that Snape cuts?
| teddy240b chapter 12 . 3/18/2013
Severus as Dr. Frankenstein - a great idea. Why didn't you finish the story. You're a very good writer.
| Shelbi chapter 12 . 9/24/2012
please please finish this story! I think it's a really good start!
| FlamesOfAPhoenix chapter 12 . 8/31/2012
I'm loving this and absolutely fascinated - please update soon! :)
| duffie83 chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Oooohh, very interesting start. Hermione so very rarely screws up, and never this spectacularly. :O)
| Sook03 chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
In the UK cigarettes are called "fags."
| Kerr Avonsen chapter 2 . 7/24/2011
Oh I like it when Snape is in the position of a mentor, when he tries to get Hermione to THINK instead of regurgitate her textbooks. Just the kind of story I like. Looking forward to more.
| ZabuzasGirl chapter 12 . 5/20/2011
Update! Do not let this one go! Update you put it off for way too long as it is.
| Mira Black-Lupin chapter 12 . 5/9/2011
OMG! i love this chapter! I can't believe what Snape is trying to do!
Is for Lily? it coud be very interesting to read a fic Snape/Hermione Snape/Lily!
Please pleaseee update soon!
I don't speak english very well but i'm trying! Hope you can understand what i'm saying!
| stgulik chapter 11 . 4/27/2011
I'm reluctant to read these last two chapters because chances are remote that the mysteries will all be resolved. So I'll just put this story on alert and tell you thanks for the beginning of such a great story. Your writing style is clear, concise, and free of vanity. As with your other stories, you don't skimp on descriptions of the surroundings. (I want to visit that library!) Your main characters are OOC but really engaging. It's such a pleasure to see Ron Weasley treated as a young man who has intelligence, poise and potential. Thanks again.
| stgulik chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
I've been reading fanfic for only a few months, but yours is the first - the very first - that features Hermione and Ron WITHOUT the tedious, rote explanation that they *used* to go out but that they discovered they should be just friends. Also no Ron-bashing. Very unique of you!
| Angels-heart1 chapter 12 . 1/23/2011
I loved this chapter! Please update soon!
| Ceralyn chapter 12 . 1/8/2011
I hope Severus isn't thinking of Lily...still it's very interesting. It doesn't seem to be heading down the dark depressive style other fanfics that have even attempted anything like this always have.
Very interesting overall. Severus is very mysterious; I'm glad we at least were able to find out what all the fuss was about.
Look forward to reading more.