Reviews for Illusions
PADavis chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
Love the set up - and the situation. Thanks for making Dean smart too. Love that!

Phoebe
akaStoryteller chapter 3 . 6/12/2009
I enjoyed this story very much. Sure we already know what happened on the show, but within the time period of this story we don't-so it works just fine if'n y'all ask me. hehe
Onari chapter 3 . 6/12/2009
Nice :) Maybe a little too short?

Thanks for sharing!

L xx
RhianaStar chapter 3 . 6/12/2009
I didn't think it was less inspiring... it was just sad to know that Sam had so much hope riding on the fact that he would save his brother... and of course we all know how that went... Still... loved the story and inspite of what scary stuff was happening with Sam... you kept the humor going
pandora jazz chapter 3 . 6/11/2009
I had just read this story again two wks ago, while waiting for the Brotherhood 8 book to arrive. I liked the twist with the creature and than Dean being the safe place for Sam. In the first chapter, when all Sam sees is the darkness, except for one light, I didn't realize it would be his brother, but that was perfect.

If I just kinda forget this is a third season story, that makes it even more fun to read.

You did a great job with your story, I can see why it was published.

Thanks for sharing it with us.
Zaphire chapter 3 . 6/11/2009
I loved this story the first time i read it and I love it even more the second time around. I got the chance to read it through the brotherhood zine, I actually bought the first on because of you:).

You had posted about it on the forums over at and I told my self, anything Liz writes, its so worth buying and reading. And so now am the proud owner of several brotherhood zines. :)

Though i was sad you werent in the last one.

Anyother projects by you I should keep my eyes own? I would love to read more of your stories. I truly enjoy the way you depict the brothers relationship.
Mikiya2200 chapter 3 . 6/11/2009
There's only one thing I don't like about this story and that's the fact that it's over. ((

I love how you've kept them in character (my all-time no.1 criteria for a good story) and, although I would have loved to see something like it, I am happy that you didn't give in to the temptation (at least I assume it must have been tempting! ;) of drawing this out into chapters about how this curse would change their lives in respect to sleeping-arrangements or other situations that could have become very awkward. It's really strange, now that I think about it I do have to admit that I'd love to read more scenes about it and at the same time I think that would make it less realistic and more like a comedy. So, strangely enough, I am happy you didn't do it. (I hope this makes at least some sense...)
Nana56 chapter 3 . 6/11/2009
Very good. Poor Sam had to experience the ultimate fear again, but it got the job done.

Really great fic. :)
TraSan chapter 3 . 6/11/2009
Awesome story! This is the way I like my Winchester's best. Them against the world (or the mormo in this case). Fighting the good fight and doing it together. Trusting each other.

Perfectly illustrated, girl.

Loved it!
Tribble Master chapter 3 . 6/11/2009
i like when u associate dean with the 7 dwarfs. it was a good ending. i like how sam fought with his only weapon being trust in dean. awesome.
vonnie836 chapter 2 . 6/6/2009
I love it. The mormo sure knew what scares Sam the most. Poor kid went through hell there. Good that Dean got him in time. So now I wonder what is going to happen ' be as easy as building the curse box. Hugs, Vonnie
PurpleBlaze chapter 2 . 6/6/2009
Loving this so far! Im really hoping to see the inevitable awkward moments, like sleeping arrangements and bathroom breaks.
AlexisStarFlame chapter 2 . 6/6/2009
I liked this chapter. I don't know that Dean would have been all gung ho lets shoot her but it was still really good.
Nana56 chapter 2 . 6/6/2009
Wow! I don't care when you wrote it, it's still good! Poor Sammy! That's truly a horrible creature and they need to end her immediately. I was really worried when Dean was pulled down and Sam couldn't feel him at all.

Fantastic job with this.
tanpopo no hana chapter 2 . 6/6/2009
I really like this so far - that Mormo is one freaky b*tch. Love that Sam was able to find Dean with his "inner sight" :D.

But why AU? Theoretically this could have been an ep in season 3, couldn't it? I really need to rewatch that season I think .
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