Reviews for Illusions
onemediumdrip chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Aha! This is great! That little speech was adorable. I can't wait for more!
carocali chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
"Sam nodded. “Either way, Dean. The point is I do feel more secure with you around than I do on my own, and not just for the spell. Our job…it can get pretty scary, and I trust you, you know? You’re my big brother, and maybe it’s ’cause I still look up to you, but a part of me really still believes you can fix any problem I have and…I just feel safer.”

...Suddenly, the deep expression left Dean’s eyes and he pointed. “See, that shit right there is why people think we’re gay.”"

Love that! This has a nice season 3 feel to it where the boys still trusted each other. How I miss that...

Intriguing story you have here. Do both these creatures really exist?

More please!


irishgirl9 chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Wonderful start! This looks to be an interesting story! I agree w/Sam, an empusa sounds really ugly. So it's a mormo? Sounds even uglier than an empusa. I hope Sam and Dean can stop it before it's too late for Sam. I can't wait to read more!
Nana56 chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Aw, that's so sweet! They had a moment...until Dean pointed out it was why people thought they were gay. LOL Loved that!

Awesome first chapter. Really looking forward to the rest. :)
IheartSam7 chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
that was absolutely awesome. can't wait for more.
TraSan chapter 1 . 6/2/2009

New fic from you is always a treat. What a start! Hoolarious...and heart-warming...and creepy all at the same time. Now that's writing prowess.
PlatinumRoseLady chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Oh poor POOR Sam!

If Dean needs a break, I can take over for him... *bats lashes...*
alexisabove chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
I like it!

Please continue:)
maxandkiz chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Woo hoo! You're back!

Wonderful beginning! Poor Sam. he really isn't very good in the insult department. He's just too nice.

This has got to be embarrassing for both brothers. Can just imagine the picture they make with Sam holding onto Dean. Can't wait to hear what Bobby has to say about it. :)

mshobgoblin chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
I am so glad you put this story up here. I really enjoyed the first chapter, Sam's thoughts and reactions are perfectly written. As is Dean.

Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Hob x
Mikiya2200 chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
I love it!

I love how Sam needs Dean to stay close but at the same time is (more or less ;) absolutely capable of thinking/moving/whatever on his own, a lot of authors make him so dependant on Dean that I sometimes wonder just how that poor boy is ever going to be able to do something on his own. Sam still seems like Sam to me and that's what makes this story very, very good and exciting for me! (Although I do have to admit that I might have been laughin a bit at clingy!Sam together with Dean... ;)

Can't wait for the next chapter, update, soon, please?
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