|Reviews for The Dying Illusion|
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/9/2013
Write more I ask you)
I was sucked into the story)
PS If that illiterate wrote this answer me apologize (I worked with a translator)
| k chapter 2 . 9/7/2011
It's horrible you didn't continue this. It had so much potential and the characterization and your OC's were perfect. *sniff*
| Anmynous chapter 2 . 6/30/2010
Aw, dead fic already? This looked really interesting.
| Alrich431 chapter 2 . 10/9/2009
outstanding, the writing is great, i love the oc's and the extremely compelling story. i seriously cant wait for next chapter. SERIOUSLY GIVE IT TO ME NOW! or i will haunt you...
| Avarenda chapter 2 . 9/6/2009
Whoa...unexpectedly compelling story. I want to read more. Please update soon.
| Xipz chapter 2 . 8/28/2009
Pretty good so far. Can't wait for the next update.
| Mattricole chapter 2 . 6/19/2009
Dude, I can't wait for the next chapter!
| uzukun7 chapter 2 . 6/10/2009
well thats a unique story. i wouldve thought that maybe he wouldve tried to go see yuki because if anyone can probably see him its her. in either case i hope you update soon. laterz
| JGRDL chapter 2 . 6/9/2009
lol hes actually dead haruhis gonna be depressed
| Nami Tamora Uchiha chapter 2 . 6/6/2009
I could Almost imagine Kakashi Hatake and one of my oc's (nami Tamora Uchiha) in Kyon and haruhi's position.
| Hejin57 chapter 2 . 6/5/2009
Interesting chapter, I must say. I have to also admit that you're not abusing the story with the OC's you're adding. They fit in quite nicely, actually. You know, this would be a perfect time for Kyon to spy on Suzumiya-san in the shower or something...:)
Hehehe, if he were that perverted. XD
I'll be waiting for the next part. Keep it up!
| an1979 chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
Great writing and interesting plot.
*Added to alert list.
| leonazo chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
Like it... a lot! The plot is interesting and also original. Kyon's characterization is really good, however, i find i little bit too much angry.
Anyway keep it up!
| fivehundredandsixtyfour chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Wow. This was really good. The cliffhanger is done really well, and thats alot of suspense...
And you finally managed to finish off Ryoko Asakura's plan... I always did wonder what would happen if Kyon actually were to die after reading/watching that... eh well, even more the reason for me read this...
Update soon please! xD
| Isekaijin chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
You killed Kyon...
Man, this is gonna be good.
Anyways, you started well the story. But Kyon was bitching a little too much.