Reviews for Spirit
EverloyalPoptart chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
The substance was good, but you should prolly think about paragraphs.

much love,

everloyal
piloteria chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
Nice shep whump at the hands of a wraith queen. She was well written and I love her observations of Sheppard as a formidable warrior.
shepsgirl72 chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
She's a creepy one, isn't she? You get inside this queen's head really well, and some nice whump in here, too. Good job. :D