Reviews for A New Dawn Rising
NusiainForks chapter 3 . 6/7/2009
It was fun seeing Bella try to figure things out and come to terms with all her vampire senses and her new strength. And I guess she also is okay with becoming a vampire. I understand her reasoning, but I wonder how much of thie easy acceptance comes from the fact that she now has a killer bod and a lot of grace ;-). Good job. Looking forward to the next chapter.
NusiainForks chapter 2 . 6/7/2009
So Bella took to being a vampire pretty well! I loved her self-examination in the mirror, so much more positive than when she did it in the first story. And I love that she growled at Rosalie. Go Bella!

It cetainly is interesting that she is not even remotely hungry at this stage of her Vampire life.

And how nice was Jasper to take all that burn away from her as she was turning? You just have to love Jasper!
NusiainForks chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Woo hoo! I'm so excited about the sequel. How will Bella feel now that she was turned into a vampire involuntarily? Can she and edward really make this relationship work? I'm looking forward to finding out.

Meanwhile, it's nice to see Jake make peace with Edward and let Bella go in his own way. I really enjoyed hearing his thoughts on all this! Great job!
Esemtee92 chapter 3 . 6/7/2009
It was refreshing to read your take on Bella's first time hunting. She initially struggles with her new strength and needed to learn what to do. Nice change of pace. You're doing great! Please update again soon!
Jacob Black Ooft. . .Phitt chapter 3 . 6/7/2009
Luv luv luv it

I can't believe you have so few reviews for such a brilliant story

Update soon
xxxlookingformyedwardxxx chapter 2 . 6/5/2009
wow great chapter cant wait for more!
LovesTwilightFanFics83 chapter 2 . 6/5/2009
love this chapter thumbs up!
Jacob Black Ooft. . .Phitt chapter 2 . 6/4/2009

Luv it lots

update soon
Esemtee92 chapter 2 . 6/4/2009
I like this Bella's view of things going on around her after being changed. Much more believable. You have a great start here and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
ChainsawSweetheart chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
I like it! This is going to be really interesting! :)
xxxlookingformyedwardxxx chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
love it cant wait for more!
LovesTwilightFanFics83 chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
ooh already liking this story. can't wait for Bella to wake up.
Esemtee92 chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
I thought it was really cool to start with Jacob's POV. Very nice touch. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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