Reviews for Crucible
Mizundaztood23 chapter 1 . 6/27/2014
Ajujujuju! This story is so beautiful! Heart clenching and warming at the same time! If this happened the earth will have an eathquake because i jumped up and down with joy XD
Nice one shot! I really really loved it! :D 3
ichirukitard chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
Wow, this was sooooo awesome and beautiful! I loved it! It was well written and the characters were IC. Excellent job! )
sarouel chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
i don't know if i ever left a review,if i didn't, i'm sorry for it..this story is amazing, and i hve to tell you it is not the first time i read far is one of my favorites in here, and i do read it a lot, loooot of times...i really can see them like that..the emotions seem so real..i really wich it had a sequel, at the same time, it's so beautiful like this..

ok, i wanted to thank you for sharing and congrats!

keep them coming!:)))
lovelovelove chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
a.m.a.z.i.n.g! absolutely brilliant love your work, its so discriptive I actually cried - I know, I'm just strange like that but your writing is amazing so keep up the good work!
lilica chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Beautiful. Absolutely amazing. Ur writing is just breathtaking and ur characterisation was flawless. I couldnt stop reading, i just wanted it to keep going...u showcased all the emotions perfectly with amazing description! I loved the way u wrote rukia's realisation of her felt so real and in character. I wished ichigo would have displayed something similar but more downplayed however im happy u showed a glimmer of hope towards the end )
empathapathique chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
his was beautiful. You used pivotal facts in the current conflic to evoke painful feelings in both Ichigo and Rukia. It was heartfelt, and made me gasp sometimes, at the sheer power of the emptions being expressed. There was a bit of tense confusion throughout the piece, but honestly, the content is so wonderful, that it is easily overlooked. Great, great work.
shinigamiwannabe chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
Wow. I can't believe I just read this story (and I thought I had bookmarked all of the best Ichigo/Rukia stories...). This was just beautiful. Well-written, grammatically and stylistically. I absolutely loved how you characterised Ichigo and Rukia here.

And Aizen's torture of Ichigo was just heart-breaking.

You did such a great job with this story that I hope you will write more of it! A sequel, please?

This was such a great read and I can't wait to read more from you. Thanks for writing this :-)
Goku's Daughter chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
/He may not pay it much mind, but she, as well as nearly every other female in Seireitei, knew for a fact that Kurosaki Ichigo was a beautiful man. Beautiful in a way that was completely different from the cold marble perfection of her brother, or the nurturing, fatherly features of Ukitake-taicho.

Ichigo was wild power and masculine force, enthusiasm and determination tempered to flawless steel by a heart bigger than his body could hold and a generosity in the form of hands offered to defeated enemies and unfaltering support for those he cared for. He was the warmth of the sun, sunlight that made all it touched grow. A smile tickled at the corners of her lips as a human song floated in the very back of her head. You are my sunshine, my only sunshine...

Her skin prickled when something rippled through her, from the top of her head to her toes, leaving shivers and goosebumps in its wake. When she looked up at Ichigo again, taking in his face and his eyes, she gasped as she felt the floor open up beneath her as her heart spun with revelation.

She loved him./

Wow. Just wow. Your writing I'm sure I told you this before, but the way you described this ordeal, this scene, I could feel my heart get light and warm and I felt myself fall more in love with Ichigo and Rukia, and really, with Ichigo as Rukia realized her love for him.

Your mastery of words is amazing! I wish I can grow to write more like you. )

The story itself - realistic, in character, just... lovely. I loved how you portrayed Rukia with different sides (ie. tough to soft). Did I read correctly that Ichigo has long hair now? If so, I loved that part where she muses he has prettier hair than her now! Ahaha! (and more so that Inoue and Ichigo would look TERRIBLE together! XD) I also LOVED how you portrayed Ichigo. Ah! Excellent! *hugs*



amehoshi141 chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
OMG. I loved this fic :)
LastPandaHero chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
darklover chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
You did a wonderful job of writing this fic. I loved every thing abou it. I loved how you brought their guilt about Masaki and Kaien. It's kinda annoying that they feel guilty but if I were in there place I'd probably feel the same way. A bit hypocritical I suppose. Back to your story, absolutely wonderful. I think the characters were in character.
Black Sun Upon An Icy Sky chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
OMG, that story left me speechless O.O

XxdaniXx chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
awesome one-shot!
MrsKurosaki x chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Beautiful. An amazing, flawless story. Maybe you could do a sequel or continue this story.

Kaden-san chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
wow. really. you captured everything
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