Excellent!

This made my day. I loved it. And a lot of the plot points where dead on. When did Ron and Hermione ever show attraction? Albus Severus was said to be the youngest kid and did have Harry's eyes but it never said he was his kid. And really... All the other plot wholes makes since written here too. And Arthur's comment was awesome considering Molly and author is not Harry's and Hermione's parents. Thank you for writing this.

This is a fun story!

This is hilarious. And true. I’ve always wondered why JKR never saw the romance building between Harry and Hermione over the series.

Hilarious. And right on the money, too.

Love this story!

Very cute.

nice one, fun point of view.

Great story it was very funny

But I can’t stand by tom and peter sorry but peter makes me want to be sick looking at him he litrally looks like he tried to turn into his amigmi and failed and tom sorry to say this but like half the viewers in the second movie found tom riddle HOT

So basicly their reactions to the book
I personally found the bit where voldy said well is it not marrying her then I’m not dying

Personally, i enjoyed this one shot, and JK Rowling did admit ti was a mistake in how book 7 ended and Ron-he's never been right for Hermione, any Harry Potter fan knows that! I enjoy your stories, well i said all i wanted to say.

I love ️ this story I wish someone could do the same thing with Freddy Krueger and Jason Voorhess ️️

YASSSSSSS. DIS IS AMAZING

All valid points.

And I definitely agree that harry and hermione were boy/girlfriend early on in th books