Reviews for Will's biggest wish
Guest chapter 2 . 1/2/2013
I will be hanging up my writing career very soon mostly because i have main piorites in life my family, my mum, and nephews and my siter in law and my brother, i must soon learn to act my age and hang up my computer for all eternalty
XV-Dragon chapter 2 . 6/13/2010
Techically Astro Will did not cause the mess, since the floor should not have given way so easily, but still a pretty good chapter.

Can't wait to see the next chapter!
XV-Dragon chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
Interesting story, though you might want to get a beta reader to fix the small errors here and there. Can't wait to see chapter 2.