Reviews for Leviathan
fanfic designer chapter 1 . 1/3
wow! incredible awsome fic! I love it , Liet and Po where both a little OC but, the way you write the and the use of biblic references , and the part where Feliks is praying I love it , well done a diferent fic about them and it was so hot to sees a more "seme" Poland .. jejejeje I really enjoy reading it well done! congrats!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
This was very well written and original and stuff. Keep writing!
Neolavender chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
Wow, an intense LietPol fanfiction :O I love how you written the story with the spices of religion and stuff, as if they really are exist. The end of the story is also unpredictable and kinda scary.

But anyway nice job! Please keep writing!
AelanRyland011 chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Wow.. I'm not religious.. but seriously.. just wow. Blew me away good. I was iffy on the whole Poland/Liet thing.. but everytime I tried to find Ivan/Toris fics.. they were just sad. Dark, depressing. None of them remotely happy. I was depressed.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Amazing. I have no other words.
Sana Mae chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Yes. This.

Dude. I love this pairing but so much of it ends up being just meh, this is perhaps one of my favorite fics EVER.

And so in character for Poland. It's rare to find a hetalia author get the balance right between 'nation' and 'person'.

In short, more stories like this, please?
the gone and forgotten chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
i love all the biblical references.
TheLegacyLives chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
I adore this and this writing.

This isn't the first fanfiction I've read with a devout catholic feverishly begging forgiveness for unholy lust, but nevertheless this has to be the best character portrayal I've seen in a long time. Especially for Poland.

And though I find this pairing very attractive, the sex was much more dramatic and gripping than sexy to me. The finish with stained glass was such great imagery, the symbolism was lovely.
Shaposhit chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
D'aww! So sad! I absolutely love this! There aren't enough fics out there that point out the importance of religion in the world.

"If you are easily offended by sex on an altar..." Lawl.

This fic is very, very bad and very, very good. But I'm okay cuz Jews don't go to hell. -shot-
TinyAngel16 chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
You have killed me! This was so delicious! Oh yes, we all have our sins. ;) Mine is yaoi and Im ready to go o hell for it. But anyways, I lovd this so much! Thank you for writing! :D
Hitsu4HinaEva -Hari-Sama chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
I find this funny 'cause I'm agnostic. x3
SecretSorrowXXX chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Oh god... The ending with the stained glass... that was a perfect way to tie things together. Genius. I am not a Christian (Yay Islam!) so I had to look up what Leviathan was But anyway, very nice. Very poetic. Very conflicting. Good job :D
KiraKira-Kirimi chapter 1 . 6/28/2010

How can I put my love for this story into words?

This is not the first time I've read it, nor will it be the last. But your narration, your portrayal of Poland - they're impeccable.

This fic is just amazing.
youkai chick supreme chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
Wow... Just, wow. Serious!Poland is just beyond my comprehension. Damn. Sad. Sucha good way to end it too, with the light coming in through the stained glass casting red on them. Very poetic. Seriously sad. Loved it, even though the Christian in me squirmed.
ZAFO chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
you write wonderfully...
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