Reviews for Cloudy Days
Madame Minuit12 chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
haha funny :DD
redchinese chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
i love your characterization of him

rather endearing
kitsune67 chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
i think this is really good... i like the interaction between shikamaru and naruto.. well done..
Rawrmander chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
I liked it; Shikamaru is such a great character to write dribbles of.

Normally I'd produce some constructive criticisms; but I can't think of any for this short...

Wait I think I got one.

"Hyuuga chick"? You'd think Shikamaru has been social enough to at least know their names. d:
Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
Hahahahahaha! Shikamaru can be so mean when he wants to. Now Naruto is spending all of that money! But this was very well written. Gave all the information that we'd be curious about without being mushed or too lengthy. Easy to read and understand. I loved it! Happy Writings!