Reviews for My Angel Wings
xoxzaraxox chapter 1 . 7/28
This is just stunning. It's easy to see that in every sentence you put in so much thought and depth. I love the perspective and how vague yet how detailed the writing is. It's beautiful, and truly does capture the situation perfectly.

I struggle with anorexia, insomnia, depression and anxiety. The emotion you put in this is so genuine, so real, that it really puts everything into perspective. I couldn't help but let a few tears slip at the emotion and the effect it has on me. You are such a talented person, don't let that go.

Stay strong. Don't lose hope. You are so strong and I admire that you shared such a personal and important part of your life with us. Even though I have, never give in to your eating disorder, because it will swallow you if you do give it. It will destroy you, just like it's doing to me

Stay strong xxx
Em chapter 1 . 7/6/2015
This was great. It's written really well. I'll have to check out some more of your work. It's always great when authors share a piece of themselves like this. Makes the rest of us feel less alone :/
Melanie chapter 1 . 4/9/2015
Anonymous chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
This is the most beautiful thing I have ever read. Perfectly exemplifies how I thought when I had anorexia- when I was lavender-lilac-lovely- but portrays it so realistically that I can't want to go back. Thank you so much for this.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
This is the most beautiful thing I have ever read. It perfectly exemplifies how I thought when I had anorexia, when my world was lavender-lilac-lovely. So beautiful.
delicatetears chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
Fanfiction has only once been the reason for my tears. And after reading this, I can now say I was crying the entire time like before. The other one was long; quite a number of chapters. But this is such a short piece and how you've weaved the words together is beautiful and heart-wrenching. How you've managed to grasp the reader's attention and how, even with the repetition of the same combination of words, I treasure every single one. I admit, I was kind of reluctant to read this but now, I really wish I'd read it earlier. It was lovely.
Seph Meadowes chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
I've never had an eating disorder and I don't know anyone who has or has recovered from it but this story was so beautiful. The words and the flow and the story painted this picture of a couple who loved each other so dearly, of a woman who wanted to save herself but didn't know how to anymore, of a man who wanted to save her but could not because he was so scared, kept fighting on till that last painful second. I have never cried for a one-shot in a long time especially getting so emotional just at the first paragraph. Angel wings, kisses and flowers for luck - all so lovely and yet painful at the same time.

I feel guilty now for all those times I entertained having an eating disorder, for having shoved my fingers down my throat and making myself puke everything in my stomach that one time, for thinking for a selfish moment that I was not hurting myself and those around me because I just didn't want to be fat anymore. I guess I just wanted to be an angel too.

Thank you for writing this.
Carolyne chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Heartbreaking 3

You really have a talent with words
beaabop chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
I know it was written for anorexia, but I think it goes for "self-harm" as well. I hate the feeling that your useless and that people would be better off without you but I can't get rid of it. It's nice to think that others suffer like me, that I might be normal after all, but terrible at the same time. Thank you for this story. 3 X~~Bea
Dramione4Life chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
I cried. I never cry and this reduced me to tears. I've fought my own bloody battle with anorexia and i feel like you've captured how one feels in that situation perfectly. Sadly, i lost the man I loved whilst fighting my eating disorder and perhaps that's why this hit me so intensely. Anyway, wonderful read. Great job.
PeanutNinja chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
That was really beautifully written. :)
Stephenie O Conner chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
i croed reading the end of it! i hope you dont mind but i showed it to my friend who recently battled with anorexia. it helped her move on with it! its a very touching peice and you should be soo proud of yourself!


KittyLover44 chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
That was so well-written with beautiful imagery.
Spellbound Slave chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
I did cry at the end. I can tell that that must have been hard to wright but im very glad u did.
JaceDamian23 chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
very sad story. but good. Liked how you worded it

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