Reviews for Clean |
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![]() ![]() ![]() How well you weave all the conflicting emotions together, leaving me with a warm feeling sharpened with worry over Frodo's state. You invoke your character's emotions excellently, I love your writing style. |
![]() ![]() eww... |
![]() ![]() wow. normally, I'm not one for Frodo/Sam fics, but this was just wonderful. It's a beautiful piece, and the characterizations are dead-on. Great story. I loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw...this is very, very well done. :') I...I can't find the words. But it's fics like these that make me accept F/S slash a bit better. This is nothing bad. :) Just - sweet. |
![]() ![]() That was very well done. It could have been really tasteless but you pulled it off emulate Tolkiens own writing style to near perfection as well. |
![]() ![]() Beautiful, this is one of my very favorites! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh...how sweet, and how very sad! You're right about how it started out amusing (the smell comments are rather humorous) and took an angstier turn. The bit about Sam's shoulders was especially touching, in my opinion; he sacrifices his own welfare far too readily. It ends with very little hope, but the love conveyed is heartbreakingly poignant. *sniff* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Likely my favorite of your Fro/Sam fics. How you write it with absolutely no character degradation is a mystery to me. Yet you do so. Beautiful, beautiful job. The bruises from Sam's pack was the best touch of all. |
![]() ![]() Wow. Very nice. Very in-character, too, it seemed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wowser and coolith and wowser again! i envy thee, for thou writes so goodith! |
![]() ![]() Wahh! Angsty, yet so sweet. I love how well you wrote Sam and Frodo, so in character...Even with Sam's attraction to Frodo. Keep writing more F/S slash, please? |
![]() ![]() awe now that was just sweet. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() /very/ touching. Beautiful writing, and I'm most impressed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really great story! You have a lot of talent in writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Breath-taking, as always... I'm absolutely jealous, and off to read more. |