Reviews for Just Do It, an Alphabet Weekends Outtake
richelleabigail chapter 1 . 4/1/2014
I read Alphabet Weekends first and could not wait to read the outtakes! I really enjoy your writing style and your versions of Edward and Bella. Your universe puts them at an age with me, so I loved the throwback to 1999 when I was also 16. Just a small note also that I appreciate your use of betas and proper grammar and spelling. It makes the work so much more enjoyable! Great stuff! I can't wait to keep reading!
Pink Bead Girl chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
Very lovely, sweet, awkward and realistic. I liked this a lot, your version of Edward is just the sweetest sensitive guy on the planet. Nicely done.
SarcasticBimbo chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
Awwww, that was sweet.
CullensTwiMistress chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
I love this Edward, he was sooooo sweet! he was always sweet...
InkedBaby chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Ha, that was so awkward and cute. It was exactly how I imagined reading Alphabet Weekends.

And damn Emmett, ahaha.
tweetytweets chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
im yet to read alphabet weekends..but im sure im gonna love it:)
Bitches-Love-Canons chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
man, that was almost funny!
deesirius chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
Lol! That was insanely cute...Kind of the pefect 1st time...mine was too actually! :) Although just like B&E here didnt last too long lmao!
LizzyAtTheLake chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
Aww, a sweet and realistic first time
angie chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
awww it was wonderfull :) great story! i wish all of us can have a beautiful first time experience.
MrsJakeBlack chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
naww that was a sweet first time

loved it

lucky cullenr chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
really nice outtake, I really enjoyed it, and it's a perfect addition to AW...
97chuckles chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
thats was actually really good :D you did great on this story :D
Roshambo83 chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Emmett, ya moron! I hope you elaborate on what happened afterwards?
futuregirl1709 chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
Oh, they're so awkward! LOL! I love that! :)

I think Edward as a sixteen-year-old is very cute, listening and believing everything his big brother says. On one hand I love that, but on the other I keep thinking that if he hadn't he and Bella wouldn't have ended up with that stupid no-kissing rule and who knows how long they would've been together by now! But I gotta love Emmett anyway, stupid ideas or not :P

I also loved how Bella had the balls to go and buy condoms when Edward wouldn't do it. Go girl! :D Who's the leader now?

And those nicknames for Edward's hands.. LMAO!
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