|Reviews for Twisted Metal: War|
| Lady Luna chapter 4 . 12/9/2014
Nice. I like how you made Shepherd like not wanting to follow people like Sweet Tooth, but knows he has to in order to save his family. I also like how he's not the only good guy in this "Death to Calypso" party. (I'm refering to Outlaw)
| Lady Luna chapter 1 . 12/5/2014
Do one about John Doe( from Black)'s daughter. It would make sense that she would want revenge against Calypso for killing her daddy.
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/28/2014
Either Shadow or Grasshopper.
| Lady Luna chapter 3 . 11/27/2014
It was insane. It was suicidal. "I'm totally in!" LOL
| Lady Luna chapter 5 . 11/27/2014
Either do grasshopper, thumper, twister, or could you do orbital and quarto from 3. or Shadow
| scarlet.sweet1 chapter 2 . 6/7/2014
I think you should do Sweet Chick aka Sophie Kain
| Angel of the Axis chapter 5 . 8/24/2013
OOH! Sign me up! I wanna get rid of that bastard for good. (I hate Calypso with a passion. :D)
Angel of Death
Name: Devile Carila (Ca-ri-la)
Height: (She's only a foot smaller than me, so...) 4'5
Vehicle: Angel of Death (Description: It is all obsidian color with a red stripe in the middle with the words 'ANGEL OF DEATH' in light blue writing. It is a minivan with two cannons, one on each side, with a large cannon on top. It has retractable wings, so it can fly a bit.)
Keep going! I love this!
| multipersonality dex chapter 5 . 6/6/2012
and please no scarface
| Ginkyofu13 chapter 5 . 5/3/2012
What about Dollface, not the one from 2012, but the original one from the last game.
| nitroalec chapter 5 . 11/1/2011
awesome, next should be dollface
| Demon Guard666 chapter 5 . 8/2/2011
I really really really really like this, I love the idea and you portray it quite well. I've been around the interwebs and this the best one of the 'revenge on Calypso' I've seen yet, no spelling or punctuation mistakes so far. My favorite character is Lil Miss Grimm, I always wondered what happened to the girl when Calypso tranferred his powers. And I have a character suggestion, one of mine from my story that I never got around to publishing.
Cyanide, A.K.A. Diane Clancy.
Hair: Long, Straight, Black.
Eyes and skin: Green eyes, pale skin.
Body type: Used to be voluptuous but her recent change in lifestyle caused her to lose some weight, dropping her to medium curves. Not very much muscle mass, which is why she would normally rely on guns.
Personality: Grade A Bitch... Literally. (This part is what I've developed from my story, so I guess its part of her personality.) She doesn't know what to think of Sweet tooth but when the two are in the same room she often will make snide remarks and insults, despite the fact he hasn't killed her yet.
She used to be an office worker about two years ago, directly under the head of a large company. Until her boss was caught in embezzlement and other things. He set the blame on her and fired her and took off before she found out where he went. She killed two cops that night when they attempted to arrest he, she would have gotten twenty years Coming back the next day she went nuts and killed about nine people or so to find him. Not finding him she stole one of her co-workers cars, a SUV or some other big car, and took off as well.
Now she's been killing off anyone that's been aquainted with her boss, anyone. She's becoming well known, serial killer quality even, hence why she could be recruited. She's heard of Calypso and the twisted metal contests, and thinks if she finds the man she could wish to find her boss and get away with all her murders scott free.
I really hope that wasn't too long...
| skyward2312 chapter 5 . 6/26/2011
this is actually a very very good and amusing fic to read, your OC lil miss grimm is pure genius and i love her! I dont know if your still continuing this fic or if your still taking suggestions but i'd like dollface aka darkside from twisted metal black to appear in this, i would think she'd wanna hunt down calypso cause her ending was she was gonna kill all the bullies in the world so she would realise that calypso is one big muthaeffing bully for screwing up a lot of people's lives. I really hope you'd consider dollface as a character, even if you did'nt, i'd still read this cause so far its been a helluva ride. XD
| AzNx dRiFtEr chapter 5 . 4/30/2011
| Brandon1299 chapter 5 . 4/21/2011
I like it alot its great keep it up I would love to see how this all turns out
| Rice Guy chapter 5 . 3/8/2011
Pretty well written, if I must say. Captures the characters pretty well. I really loved that chapter 5 ending.
As for a suggestion... Maybe Spectre from Black? Her wish pretty much drove her to near-insanity (well, more so than she already was...)