|Reviews for Twenty Truths From The Journey|
| Awkward Inc chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
Going to my favs :)
I particularly loved 4 and 5. I have a problem with 6 though, as Sandaime didn't tell Naruto about the Kyuubi so he could have a chance at a normal childhood but he was planing on telling him when he was older.
""13. On the morning of his 14th birthday Jiraiya asked Naruto if he knew what day it was. Naruto replied with "The day Yondaime died". Jiraiya wasn't quite sure what to make of that."" This one killed me. So sad.
| Queen of Narnia49 chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
I loved the part where Jiraya stopped Naruto from getting married. :D
I think that you described Naruto and Jiraya's relationship wonderfully. Number thirteen made me very very sad.
Overall, wonderful job!
| heather XD chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
My most fav would have to be 17 19 and 20 bc 17 was just hilarious knowing how clueless naru can be lol ...the ending sentence on 19 made me tear up but 20 actually had me crying :)
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
This is Beyond Amazing!
This is Absolutely Increadible AMAZING!
How could you write something like this that sooo makes sense?!
Whoa! Naruto can do math! All math or just the normal-important one?!
Jiraiya really taking care of Naruto! Really became one of his great-favorite-precious guardians/adults!
Kuusoooo! This is too Awesome!
| bat-tron chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
Aw, man that was absolutely incredible! Amazing job, these fanfiction's always get me. But this one is in the top ten. Loved it!
| Anoreyniel chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
There are so few fics that manage to capture the canon personality of the characters perfectly and the dynamics of the relationships yet still maintain the originality and style of the fanfic author
| loveinuyashatoshiro chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
| Fish chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
I love this story. I always have loved the way people can write about what could have been said, happened or whatever. And jiraya is one of my favorite character. And I liked how you wrote about him.
| Space chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
This is really cool. I like the "borderline street kid in some of his mannerisms" manly because it could be really interesting.
| Chouko Chango chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
Really touching, really interesting and REALLY funny all rolled into one. It's very good.
heeheehee. I think numbers 9 and 17 are my favourites, especially 17 I laughed so hard!
| stickybynature chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
Enjoyable read man. Keep it up!
| Raj8 chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
I liked this story but then most 20 trusth storys are awesome.
| Crazycally chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Its really great I found 5 and 17 the funniest. you really captured the characters well done and keep writeing
| Heiress of the Hyuuga chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
I loved it! I have read so many 20 truths or 22 Times or whatever, but non were about Naruto's training Journey with Jiraiya. I sincerely don't know what to change.
Heiress of the Hyuuga
| ensis013 chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
This is really good. I think that this fic really stays true to Naruto and Jiraiya's characters. The end was especially touching and the little tidbits of information gave an inside view of Naruto's life when he was young. It was an artfully written piece and absolutely fabulous . I was listening to Steven Tyler's Love Lives ( which helps with the atmosphere of the story) while reading this and I shed a few tears when reading the 20th truth, because I realised that the question was such a Naruto thing to ask.