Reviews for The Last Moments of Severus Snape
Mie chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
That was really good.
Huntington's chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
Very sweet, if a little cliche. Your being rather literal in your writing, try to use more descriptive imagery- this is poetry, after all. I liked the bits you did have.
ginnyjaffa chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
That was amazing! the emotion in it and how it is linked to Lily is really clever. i personally think it captured Snape's thoughts perfectly! I almost cried, it was that good.

Well Done!

gj x
RandomReggie chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
I was listening to 1973 by James Blunt when I read this, it fitted so well.

I cried so much, its ridiculous, my sister thought I was 'dying or something', then I told her why she laughed, she read it an she cried too !

So this is from both of us :




Thank you for this beautiful story

RandomReggie and her sister

Carriecurry chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
This was so beautiful, I almost cried at the end!

But I think the poem would have been even better if you had a rhyme at the end of each line. That way, the poem would become even more intense. :)
somethingjustlikethat chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
Amazing. Its really captured what Snape felt. Bravo.