So sorry you didn't add to this story. I really enjoyed it and would have loved to see where you take it.

Sabotage?! Great little story—but you need to continue! Did you?! I will definitely check!

Nice whump and friendship fic with a dramatic cliff-hanger at the end! *cue dramatic music* Great story!

Thank you! Thank you! THANK YOU!

That's my challenge. I stopped checking on it because I thought no one would ever take it up. I'm going over and see if any one else took the bait.

You did an excellent job! I was first engaged because I recognized the challenge from your author's notes. I then recognized the passages. Then I just enjoyed your telling of the story. What a wonderful delightful surprise. I'm so breaking my face with a major grin.

I need to find your part 2 now.

Thanks so much again for taking this on. *Doing the happy dance*!

Ouch! Electrical burns. Poor Sheppard...

And Rodney, he never forgets to eat. But saving Sheppard's life must have been more important.

Great story! Keep up the good work:)

It's a great story & was interesting to read.. but I'm more of a Rodney-whump kind of a gal.. ;)

Still, congrats on a exciting story!

this one was really really good!

Nice, nice, nice...

Rodney- and Shep-Whump in a story... great