Reviews for The Magic In Me
tinkerbear10 chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
i love it aloy!
xx'Gothic-Manga-Girl'xx chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
This was good and don't worry the ending was greaat! I'm going to add this to my faves for sure.
austentwilightfan92 chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
great story
My-Room-Is-My-Retreat chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
Oh my goodness! That was so amazing! You should write more on this story! )
disneyqueen chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
Hi

This was a good first NYSI story. A few things though. When you're in Allyson or Danny's pov don't switch back and forth from using "I" to "He" or "She" it makes it confusing.

There were a few grammar issues, but nothing major. I really enjoyed the plot line, nicely done. The interactions between Allyson and Danny were perfect given how much they've grown up. And the songs worked really well too, but maybe next time just put like the last few lines of the song, so that you can dive into the actual story more, unless YOU personally wrote the songs. The lyrics just take away from the main plot if they're not written from you and if they're super long, in my opinion.

Other than that, great job and PLEASE write more NYSI stories, the section needs them. Keep up the great work.

D-Queen