Reviews for These Fleeting Touches
polomints63 chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
ThatFanFicGuy chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
I must admit, your awesome. this was a superb one-shot, and the best one-shot about Rin and Len I have ever had the pleasure of reading.

I like how it ended. very sweet. the story was very loving and romantic, and if you don't make more, I'll hunt you down and kill you dead, 'cause you not writing about these two should be a crime.
Tarale's Sweet Apple chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Oh... oh my... this is, this is so great... Very sweet, poetic, romantic... and near the end, you show that they had broken their brother and sister bond by revealing their marital status. This has to be the best I ever seen, well, other than your Naruto one-shot with Vampire!Naruto and Doll!Hinata.


~ Tarale's Sweet Apple
rimiburt chapter 1 . 6/4/2009

*stares at screen speechless*

You made me shiver at 'the way me (a mistake, should be he :D) moves to the beat of the music, that innocent-like expression'

That was great! Write more, David! :3
8LaDolceVita8 chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
This was adorable

Please write more one shots