|Reviews for One More Time|
| Robin.D chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
that was good i liked it :):):D:D
| Taylor.Erin.Leigh chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
Holy Mother of God.
I just read some of your lemons and WOW! You write some of the BEST lemons I have ever read. You write soooooo well. It is so vivid I can barely believe it. HOT HOT HOT.
You are UUNBELIEVABLY AMAZING!
P.S. I know I sound a bit crazy, but I mean it.
| gabycaldemeraz chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
ohmygawd! i cant even form words! LOL
You know what I LOVED? that in the begginging before the "other type of fun" starte, haha, when jacob was teasing her, you could tell that they have fun together. you know what i mean? at least to me i could picture Jakes smile and grin whenever she would say
"Jacob!", they seemed like a playful couple and i REALLY liked that.
My favorite line, probably out of everything Ive ever read :
"...my thoughts scattered like autumn leaves in the breeze."
| ozlady80 chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
awesome one shot i loved it
| sabbylou42 chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
Oh Gosh! I am going to have to read THAT one more time... and one more time...and one more time! Where is my hubby? Hot!
| fearMyFAN chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Love it love it love it A********************** lol
| mkpd chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Y-U-M! Dayum, i want him! :D
| I'm Miss World chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
Very erotic! GREAT STORY!
| Kara'Hysteric chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
Haha. I liked it, ;D
| BlaiseLynn chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
So who was that...Not Jacob, but the girl...Please, oh GOD ALMIGHTY, TELL ME IT WASN'T RENESMEE...please...