|Reviews for Silent Tears|
| x-S-A-K-I-x chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
ooow,...thats sooo cuuute !
| Shardwing52 chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Really great one-shot. I agree that Ruka would be scared of lightning(I think Rua would to, but this was made sometime ago). It was very cute how Rua comforted her until the lightning storm was over. Great job, and keep writing more storys.
| 8 Bit 8 Hit chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
I love this even though I haven't watched the show in forever!
| blaze12 chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
to youdontknow you might see that long post in some stories im simply trying to motivate somone to do it.i might write the whole story in a review and if the authur likes it he can copy and publish i only have a psp i cant publish it thats why i might write the entire story in a review and if the authur likes he can copy and than publish it.
| blaze12 chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
ive got to ask is it possible for you to make a rua ruka incest fic because there is not one thats goes bump in the night is terrible and not believable lua days is a crackfic and theres way to much gay stuff in theres a french one thats long but its not believable at all while its a little serios the relationship was totoly rushed i mean he wakes up and intantly kisses her for no reason pure you make one make it romantic like the faithshipping mayby 2 3 chapters it onsided at first like leo has feelings for luna but she isnt aware however as the story progresses luna develops feelings for leo in the end one of them confesses thier feelings to the could include dueling idea for the story would be its another day at duel academy and somone flirts with luna which leo gets jeolis and ppulls her away luna asks whats his problem to which he says in an angry tone nothings hes in love with luna he goes to yusie and akiza for help to which they agree to help him tell her.
the next chater you could have him go home to tell her how he feels but she isnt home so he decides to go find is heading home this could be because you have her stay afterschool to talk to her luna heads back home shes ambushed by some bullies who try to bully her and they hert her but leo shows up telling them to go away they beat him up than walk gets up and walks over to luna whos hurt he holds her tight as she shakes in fear because of what those guys did to her he rubs a hand thru her hair saying everythinngs going to be okay and that hes there as luna looks at him she starts to develope feelings for puts his arms around her and begins to walk back home.
last chapter you could do this luna is pondering her new feelings for leo but dosnt know what to she continues to to think leo come beside her and asks whats wrong which luna says its nothing she than sits on the couch watching somthing leo sits next to her after a minute leo is tired of holding in his feelings and gently grabs her hands telling her that for a long time hes had feelings for her and confesses luna is shocked at first but then admits at first she didnt like him or had feelings for him but says things are diffrent and admits she loves him to and they kiss.
ps i hope you make one like this because none of the others are believable or serios at all
| unknown to human eye kidding chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
i dont care how long it was. it was another one
| Pikagirl13 chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
A great sibling story between Ruka and Rua, and I think that it is nice that instead of saying Aki being a bad cook, is a good cook for once!
| Blue Hurricane chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
It was great except for it being a little short and one thing:
Word 578: the "te" from "all traces of te storm vanished in the light of a new day." I think it should be "the"
Other than that, it was great!
| Misty Narumi chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
that was sweet... brotherly/sisterly love
| Kelisidina chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
Plot is unoriginal and boring, but deliverance was pretty good.
Ruka was slightly OOC, whereasin Rua was a lot more OOC. But the grammar is good, and so is the spelling. Elaboration could use a bit more intensity, and more intensity overall.