|Reviews for Divergent Circle Version 2|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/5/2015
Great writing ability, great imagination, but you really need to learn the difference between there, they're, and their. There seams to be the only version of the three you know in all your writing.
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/6/2015
Really like this story please continue it.
| jonshinra123 chapter 1 . 1/3/2015
This a great story I know it has been awhile since your last update but I hope you will continue with it.
| Gumby chapter 2 . 9/5/2014
Keep in mind….. Cylon Basestars have never been shown as anything but slowly maneuvering beached whales. Colonial Coil guns have been shown to blow Basestars apart in short order…and a Hyperion should have blown through a Basestar with the first shots.
| jabbarulez chapter 3 . 3/11/2014
unhealthy love affair with missile? yup thats the cylons!
| chain.reader chapter 3 . 7/26/2013
interesting start so far, grammar fail though...
| DialACow chapter 3 . 7/7/2013
It is a pity you never continued this story. You had a nice setup and even carried the uninterrupted Minbari journey to Zaha'dum to a satisfactory conclusion. You even found a way to take the canon Jankowski's impulsiveness into an advantage (I though him visiting Galactica in a space suit to prevent contamination was a nice touch).
| edboy4926 chapter 3 . 7/5/2013
Please, please continue.
| Beyogi chapter 3 . 3/7/2013
Interesting story so far. You wrote it is on hold, but I guess it would be nice to read more about this.
I wonder what's up with Kara. Is she really a cylon or is something else going on here? Her concerns sound rather mysterious after all.
Thank you for writing this captivating story,
| thunder18 chapter 3 . 1/19/2013
Great chapter Update soon
| the stargate time traveller chapter 3 . 6/27/2012
please update. I like where you're going with this story.
| Darth Gumby chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
I love your writing! This looks good, just remember that Basestars generally fold like a house of cards under assault from even a 50 year old Battlestar. Even a single Hyperion would have little difficulty blowing a Basestar in half in short order. As for missiles, the E-web and the interceptors should have little to no difficulty intercepting the painfully slow Cylon missiles.
| orionastro chapter 3 . 4/8/2012
amazing story so far, i imagine that the earth minbary contact will be peacefull, and that they will help mankind to deal with the cylons. I hop also that earth develops shields to protect our warships, and better armor wit he the help of the colonials , And also we start building Battlestars much more powerfull , with shields, armour , plasma and laser weapons, and deal with the cylons once and for all. after that , war with the shadows, and drive them pff this galaxy once and for all.
| Wanderer of the Dark chapter 3 . 3/13/2012
Yet another great story you abandoned. For shame...
Alas, if you ever continue it, i would like to give some constructive criticism.
1. Neither Hypeirons nor the Nova class has a single laser.
Those were used first on the Omega class destroyer, and are an aquisition of bought tech from the Narn. Both ship classes rely on medium to close range blasma batterys and on the Hyperion 2 double rail gun turrets, as well on ship to ship capital missiles, 72 on a Nova dreadnought and 16 on a Hyperion.
2. There is also the 36 fighters of the dreadnought, so your fleet would have had a total of 48 Star furries... a wee bit more then 12 you listed :)
3. based on the rate of fire of a single interceptor turret wich is according to is over 24 bolts per second and 12 on each ship... yeah... near 300 bolts per sec for 120 missiles is a bit of an overkill since the grids caught the more advanced dilgar missiles...
However, for the storys sake i agree with your description of a lucky nuke, so its not that much of a strech, but in major engadgements... only if every Raider launches a single or dual nukes on a VEEERRY wide arc can they do much damage. In single to small group battles.
All bets are off in my eyes though concerning major fleet battles... missile spam...
4. If you can, skip Kara, or simply get her back alive, with no complications. That path is riddled with waaay to many mines . Saw it oncce happen to a not as good story. Was deleted too.
5. For all that is holly and good and cheese ! Update, or at least post a discountinuity, up for adoptation, or hiatus notice man !
All in all this is as so far one off your best storys and i would love to see it come to completion.
Best wishes in real life and writting:
Wanderer of the Dark
| shadownight1389 chapter 3 . 3/4/2012
I found this story very interesting, most of your stories are I follow you here and on spacebattles. I know you have not continued with it, but the idea or maybe a story where the EA and Colonies meet before the holocaust and change history would be very interesting to read.