|Reviews for Paper Cranes & Thai Chicken|
| LouiseKurylo chapter 1 . 3/4
Wow. I would never have known it was your first Mentalist fanfic. You have certainly distinguished yourself with many of your stories. This clearly was a sweet, in-character vignette giving everyone a glimpse of what was to come. Thanks for writing it.
| MartyMac chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
Nice. You've captured the back and forth banter between Jane and Lisbon very nicely.
| Hayseed Socrates chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
Reading your older stories and I really loved this one. So gentle, and yet rang so true.
| lj13oct chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
I loved this! :))
| Lothlorien Aeterna chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
I love it!
| Shani8 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Aww... for your first foray into writing Mentalist fanfiction, this was just brilliant! :)
I enjoyed it very much... especially Jane's comments about Lisbon's amphibian friend who was residing in a desk drawer. LOL! Too cute.! :)
Great job of writing this, and I look forward to reading the other goodies from you that I've missed to date. ;)
| Teresa Lisbon 123 chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
| yaba chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
i loved this. it was SO cute :)
| kathiann chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
Humm, I liked it. Very well done, I think. I like how at the end you showed what they were both thinking.
| JocelynMcC chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
Good. Thx for sharing.
| House Calls chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
I liked this story! I think it was well set-up, and while it seems any feelings Lisbon has for Jane (beyond frustration and annoyance) are up for interpretation, I think you wrote Lisbon believably for this scene. Very nicely done!
| xxFraise chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
Love the story. The ending with Jane is my favorite part. :P
Only thing is that you kept forgetting a grammar rule: When a new person speaks, a new paragraph is made. So, Jane and Lisbon can't speak in the same line. Even if the next person just says "Hi", it still has to be a different paragraph.
| louisethelibrarian chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
Sweet and fun and well-written. Update, please!
| lil smiles chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
Damn, that was good! Loved the little nuances, especially the origami frog and subsequent crane. I'm glad you took the route you did with just a hint of romance. It's nice to see you kept them as close to the characters as you did, but still leaving room for something more to blossom between them in the future ;) Awesome first fic, I hope it won't be your last!
| Divinia Serit chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
Yay! Great job! You portrayed them both very well. I just love their playful banter! :)