Reviews for Friend Number Three
cartographer 23 chapter 26 . 7/25
I loved this story so very very much. I'm actually tearing up now it is over. Draco was so cute and it was wonderful seeing him change over the course of the fic. it was hilarious and sweet and hopeful. it is so rare to find a fic that leaves me feeling hopeful, like there is radiance on the horizon rather than that inevitability of a dolorous forever. thank you for writing it!
applesandjuice chapter 26 . 7/4
this was the first time i laughed while reading a fan-fic. it was truly entertaining.. in every aspect. i enjoyed learning about the new characters and their interactions with draco and hermione. however, while doing so i couldn’t help but feel like there were so many open ends. maybe it was your intention all along but i felt draco and hermione’s connection lacking towards the end. it felt as though they were on the verge of growing apart. i’m not usually one for closure but i wish the story had ended a definitive way.

either way, it was a great story and still by far one of the most entertaining ones i’ve read! thank for creating and sharing :)
susiequsie0 chapter 26 . 4/20
Came across this as a recommendation through a TikTok and am so glad I did. This has quickly rocketed up my list of favorite Dramione fics and it deserves so much more hype. The whole thing was so silly and clever and sweet, but also so raw and heart-wrenching at times, and it was just so, so good. I loved the characterizations of everyone in this story as they felt so authentic. I know I'm ten years late, but thank you for sharing this with us!
tuantuan92 chapter 23 . 4/18
I really love Draco and Hermione’s interaction. UWU
tuantuan92 chapter 18 . 4/17
The letter to George is everything! Love Draco’s first trip to the Muggle world!
Accioserenity chapter 2 . 4/16
Forgot some
Really beautiful and funny description of our world...I loved that part about narcissa mourning ppl who r alive...that entire conversation...that part where Draco describes happiness as pansy coming back and other stuff:nice!...love Ur OCs ...and Blaise n pansy n Draco had a nice dynamic...and pathos potion -that entire empathetic conversation was so weird it was funny...Ik I'm missing some of the joy cz I didn't read those books n never heard the songs...still...might reread this after doing that again
Good work.
Take care
Accioserenity chapter 1 . 4/16
Hey
Liked the fic,it was cool and hilarious...laughed out loud a lot of times n read many lines again just to savour them again...will read it again when sad
Hope the authors fine and enjoying writing
XxXDramioneLoveXxX chapter 26 . 3/28
Such a lovely story! I love how you portrayed Draco learning about and interacting with the muggle world especially.
Serennos chapter 26 . 3/22
This was a warm, considered story and very observant of people’s behaviour and attitude. Draco’s thoughts, reactions and development were well thought out. Very entertaining. Thanks very much.
Underlined chapter 26 . 2/8
I love the look into Draco's inner thoughts on his self-improvement journey!
Appreciate your sharing this. I hope you are still writing in some form. :D
Aphrael9 chapter 26 . 1/28
Oh, I do love vile half-blooded baby girls!
ballabi000 chapter 26 . 10/19/2020
Ok sis lemme review real quick.

First, I loved it. It was brilliant and magical. 8.2/10 would recommend.
When I read it, I couldn’t stop thinking of Draco like an anime character. I have watched exactly 0 anime in my life, but I always thought of this Draco as an anime guy. He kinda fits the vibe. He didn’t fit Tom Feltons Draco, but all the same it was perfect. You showed his feelings, and they were real. They weren’t fake or cheap. (I’ll give critique at the end, in case you wanna skip it)

I loved Hermione. I do think that Ron could have had more to do/say in here tho. I loved George. Great move using him. He’s underused and I’m glad to see he’s doing well after *voice crack* Fred. :’( Again with Hermione, I loved the fire she had, very very nice. She’s so good, but I couldn’t get her character down. She seemed like a good girl, but she wasn’t fully developed. Like a drawing of someone without color. You know who it is, but the color of their hair, and the color of their eyes make them so much more beautiful.

The friends were good. Draco’s job was a good choice. I liked how he made friends with the house elf.

The writing itself was high quality. No misspelling, no wierd run on sentences, no crazy paragraphs. K.

Narcissa was a qween. Lucius got put in his place. Everyone hates Lucius, so good move there.

Dracos epiphany was so nice at the beginning. Idk I’d say maybe one more chapter of him being a prick before he changes to good. That way the reader has more of a history to go on besides the JKR books, which he was a blatant asshole the whole time.

My only thing is maybe make it go a little longer, I wanna see Draco and Hermione married, have kids, and family life. (high key wanna see a family life fic with Dramione. All their kids running around?! Adorable)

Anyway, thank you for writing it. I’m so happy I got to read it and I ship dramione in this fic! Keep writing!

-AB
StrawberryButterfly7 chapter 26 . 10/11/2020
Every time I read this story, I’m blown away by how brilliant it is.
Puzzler54 chapter 26 . 9/21/2020
Wow I've been hooked. This is a brilliant story. Loved following the slow journey of Draco trying to change and the things he ends up getting involved in. Sweet fiery friendship with Hermione. I loved the dynamics and the start when they just couldn't have a normal conversation!

Thank you for sharing this story.
Guest chapter 26 . 9/15/2020
I am not sure if you keep up with your profile here or continue to read comments, but I wanted to thank you for a truly lovely reading experience. I read Sucker Punch earlier this week and really enjoyed it - but this one is truly wonderful. Very funny, but quite darkly so in parts. Your writing style is just wonderful for this type of story; you don’t shy from the sad and terrible parts (e.g. Draco’s upbringing) but you do so in a way that is ultimately hopeful. I can’t wait to revisit this fic again.
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