Reviews for Unwritten
Thuke chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
Very well written. definitely one of the best luke/thalia fics i've read. it really conveyed the emotions and i liked how she talked about her mom, and how even though she didn't want to be and even though she disliked her mom, she was turning out a lot like her. two thumbs up.
kesi chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
i love it but i cried that he cant be with her...
Avenger of the Olympian Flame chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
Just joking :) It's perfect.
Avenger of the Olympian Flame chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
Need more angsty feelings.
Rukichigo93 chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
Love it! Thalia and Luke are both so sad, it sucks that Thalia's a hunter in the end!

great job, it had me in tears
Kay Celestine chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
this was really amazing. _
WolfDReamer11 chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
Wow...that was really good. Very IC. Best part: "I learned one of life's many lessons a little too late. Sometimes emotions aren't as simple as being happy or sad. A smile can be faked so well that no one bothers to look twice. At least I inherited something worthwhile from my mom." Great job. I wish I had time to say more, but i'm being timed here. Faved.
zazazaza chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
It was... a bit more mellow than I would have been expecting from Thalia, you know? But then again, she just lost Luke and she's realizing that she's never going to be with him, so it really does make sense.

I love it. :)
ZoeNightshade2214 chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
Great job. I could feel the emotion in this. Awsome!
Cap'NCupcake chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
OMG! That was so cute! Very sad too. I was about to cry. I loved it!
kiiss.the.raiin chapter 1 . 6/5/2009

I could feel all the emotion and pain that Thalia must be feeling...

Great job...
aj chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
Zoe Nightshade chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
This is terrific! It really tells a lot about Thalia's personality and her life before the series.
Thalia Castellan chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
You did I really good job, its sad but understandable, I feel so sorry for Thalia.

I hope you write more soon, I look forward to reading more of your work, you bring out Thalia's feeling so well.