Reviews for Not My Time
iconofcoolness chapter 2 . 10/7/2009
Well, so far it seems to follow the game to the letter with the exception that we get to know more of the Prince's thoughts during the adventure, in comparison to the game. I am assuming that you are going to make this an alternate universe, where the course of things change from that of the game. If so, than you've got my attention. You write clear and concise, and you seem to have captured the full character of the Prince. You've stayed within the tense of the story without any confusing memory differentials. Your transitions from one scene to another and from his personal thoughts to that which is happening around the Prince are quite fluent and also easily readable. So, as I said before, if you come up with something alternate to the game you will have me loyally handing out the praise in review.
iconofcoolness chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
Seems like a good start, is it a one-shot or an alternate timeline? I mean we are talking about changing time after all.