|Reviews for The Story Not Told|
| SpiderRidersReviewAnon chapter 12 . 6/23/2017
Ooh, I like this a lot. Lots of emotion from the get go, with the portal showing up and everyone's worries. The scene with Hunter and Corona in the flowers was also really sweet. Then Hunter gets back only to find his mother died. Ouch. Well, a lot of ups and downs. Then it gets happier. I love seeing everyone together in the Outer World.
I'm wondering how Aria died, though. And if Hunter is half Insector, why doesn't he look it?
"The two laughed and wam" should be "swam".
And I agree about the chapter length. Shorter chapters are better. As long as they're not the ones that are so short you don't even have to scroll down the page. But especially on a site like this where you can't highlight.
| Requiem of memory chapter 12 . 4/20/2014
This was cute but lacking in detail, it seemed rushed...
| Requiem of memory chapter 7 . 4/20/2014
SPAHAHAHAHAHAH BUGUESE IS HUNTERS FATHER! neeeever saw that comming! Aaaah...good laugh!
| Requiem of memory chapter 5 . 4/20/2014
I find it easy, a trick I use: each chappie no less then a thousand words, no more then two thousand words...perfect length!
| mur chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
i have always wondered why they never sent him home
| Chazaq chapter 12 . 7/13/2013
love it love it love it. period
| AiyanaxXxBlack chapter 12 . 9/26/2010
buguse is hunter's father? was never expecting that XD good story
| AiyanaxXxBlack chapter 2 . 9/26/2010
um.. his hair is red not pink, but's still good
| echo chapter 12 . 3/6/2010
Awe...I just finnished reading this and it is awesome!
| TL-chan chapter 12 . 12/2/2009
Excellent end. It was a sweet twist to have all the SR come to the outer world.
If you do write a Christmas fic, I'd love to read.
| Imagamaster3 chapter 12 . 12/2/2009
So if bugese is Hunter's fatehr, doesn't that make Hunter half-invected?
| TL-chan chapter 11 . 11/18/2009
Another really sweet chapter. Glad to see an update.
| Solvent Harp37 chapter 9 . 8/25/2009
Where are the spiders at?
| TL-chan chapter 9 . 8/21/2009
I feel bad for him, finding out it was his son he wanted to kill so much. It'd be cool to see him visit Hunter.
| Lyra Ramirez chapter 8 . 8/19/2009
What about the spiders? Where are Shadow and Venus? what do they think and why arent they talking?